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I thought if a question was posed to two or more people at the same time, he was not compelled to answer, i.e., the end of 1438, when Sunny doesn’t have to answer Neph’s questions, and leaves Cassie to go rescue Jet
I think she almost remembered Sunny/Mongrel
I’m hoping for the internal crises dialogue for Nephis when she realizes her feelings for both versions of Sunny, before she finds out they’re the same person.
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Typo? … looked up at him? … glanced at him? … looked up and glanced at him?
While “people who strived to follow” is grammatically correct, by modern English standards, it doesn’t seem to flow as well to me as “people who strove to follow” or even “people who were striving to follow” - personally I like strove for keeping more similar vowel sounds in the phrase
small typo: lever -> level
Seems both conditions are really the second condition. A person could leave a sovereign’s domain by stepping out of the range of the domain’s influence in the Dream Realm or by stepping into the real world. Unless being within your pledged sovereign’s domain in the real world (i.e., near a dream gate) would still not protect you.
Small typo - “glean” instead of gleam
I’d agree with Devouring Beast= Effie, and Undying Slaughter =Jet, as these match their aspects/flaws. Keeping that theme, then Torment = Neph, and Soul Stealer = Mordret. However, I think Sunny = Mad Prince (madness due to Sun of Solace), which by process of elimination would make Kai = Dread Lord? Definitely unsure of the last two.