Ordinary_joe

Looks interesting and i like the opening of the story. Simple but enough context is given for the character and the story moving forward. Then straight to battle immediately. I hope you continue 👍

Interesting read and I love it so far. A S-I Obito as the main character is something that I always want to read and interested in. I hope it gets better and better [img=recommend]

Pokemon fanfic where it didn't start at kanto , nice 👍

First time writting review. Really like the story , the world explanation and the detail about magic in the fanfic . The interaction of the character is quite good , but the pacing of the story is a little bit too fast so the interaction of each character is too little or short , i think. Overall , i enjoy and like this fanfic (right now , chapter 44)