Ordinary_joe

I enjoy it so far, the translation is good enough, For now the story is good enough and the character is fun and have personality. Let’s just see how it go as this continues.

Looks interesting and i like the opening of the story. Simple but enough context is given for the character and the story moving forward. Then straight to battle immediately. I hope you continue 👍

Interesting read and I love it so far. A S-I Obito as the main character is something that I always want to read and interested in. I hope it gets better and better [img=recommend]

Pokemon fanfic where it didn't start at kanto , nice 👍

First time writting review. Really like the story , the world explanation and the detail about magic in the fanfic . The interaction of the character is quite good , but the pacing of the story is a little bit too fast so the interaction of each character is too little or short , i think. Overall , i enjoy and like this fanfic (right now , chapter 44)