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Ave_Dominus_Nox

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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox25d
    Replied to Ur_Mom_Gay_lol

    yes, but is it in character for Magnus to accept any criticism, and the whole eye thing happened before he was found so he would still believe himself superior in warp lore till it was too late.

    Ch 26 Chapter 24
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox1mth
    Replied to nikita_vdovin

    well, I will leave the vulkan interaction a secret for now, but I can say magnus will not be getting those tomes being his legion is shattered and being re educated on terra so while it does take a interesting point from the original lore I don't think it will match up with what the emperor is going to give him

    I've been quite busy lately with work, my gf and reading 40k to try and stay caught up on lore and ofcource to also think of ways to avoid a copyright lawsuit. I've not dropped this story but fair warning to any wants to make one pre 40k it takes alot of research and to those who might ask why it wasn't in the volcano like the original, I just want to say this was brought on early due to the Mc.
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox6mth
    Replied to MagOZomber

    I believe the orks would love these

    Ch 25 Lore dump on legions/relations with Mc
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox7mth
    Replied to victor1997

    sadly I'm not leveled enough yet to try but I'm getting there as I hope to make a valkyrie.

    Ch 25 Lore dump on legions/relations with Mc
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox7mth
    Replied to SkeleKun

    I work on the story whenever I have the time, so most often, I spend an hour a day working on it or making notes for how I wish it to go

    Ch 1 Chapter 1:The Warp shenanigans begin
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox8mth
    Replied to Kagetanehiruko

    That is a suprise as I plan the architect of this heresy to be one that most people sleep on, in my opinion. But I will say in vacuum the traitor side would never win without the twist I'm planning to give.

    Ch 24 Chapter 23
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox8mth
    Replied to Ur_Mom_Gay_lol

    nope, I have a few warp shenanigans to help with that as their is a reason I mentioned the lion was near the eye of terror.

    sorry for the long wait. I was quite busy with work but any way I just wanted to let yall know the next chapter would be a info dump but geared towards what has changed in the legions from cannon, and a few were unwritten like konrad telling lorgar of the warp but now I realize to those not used to 40k lore would be quite confused so the next one should help tell where some primarchs stand.
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox8mth
    Replied to MagOZomber

    galleons are around in lore it's just that the ironborn prefer long ships for its speed with more room for oarsmen and loot

    Ch 8 Chapter 8
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox8mth
    Replied to Averyun_imp

    some do, but as for recruiting the night, lords had one of if not the most stable gene seed, so most were compatible it was more so about mind set that set the recruits apart

    Ch 23 Chapter 22
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox9mth
    Replied to Ur_Mom_Gay_lol

    not likely since most planets in the ghoul stars are night worlds or dead ones, making it near uninhabitable for most humans without proper mutations like the nostramans.

    "Don't look like that, brother, though I may have the most planets. I highly doubt I have the same level of population as you do for each of said planet, but I'm sure you all noticed how the sector feels off. I have theories, but it seems only my people seem to have a resistance to it without being driven insane due to a possible mutation, but I am willing to join the imperium under a few conditions."
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox9mth
    Replied to Bisabing

    well I was more so referimg to get from the east side of westeros to the west not going into the north. I'm going to treat it like most Southern rivers which for most of its banks are swamp land but in the middle is just deep enough for most boats

    Author note: Later in this chapter, I would mention crossing under the twins as a way to get across westeros and the reason for this is said that the only way to cross south for the northerners is to cross the twins which is based off the London Bridge and this tied together with other things around the neck its rivers should be deep enough for ships due to how a floating castle is able to sustain itself and be movable so their must be enough space for a fleet to move across the neck.
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox9mth
    Replied to nikita_vdovin

    sure to the riddick stuff that shut is cool but he doesn't really need the morbius stuff I think all it would add would be a bit of vampirism which is saguinius's thing

    Ch 21 Chapter 20
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
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    Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

    well if the other gods were real would they truly stand idle with one of them summoning a blank slate champion that's guaranteed to never betray them. No if something was not agreed upon they would likely summon their own champions so just being realistic. plus he didn't lose his meta knowledge only the truly advanced things stuff that would bring revolutions

    "Bwhahahahaha worry not lad your not dead yet. I simply needed to inform you of a development in the game that I thought you should know. The other pantheon have noticed you with the burning star stunt you did and some have thought to bring another otherworldly but before they could make that decision I intervened and eventually we came to a deal and that was you shall loose most of your future knowledge and anything that could put any of our religions at. risk like your worlds great scisms." Stated the jolly pseudo viking God
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox10mth
    Replied to rabbit_kun

    they will be on the other side because if I remember house manderly being close to the shivering sea which is also the only port the north truly has so it means its the only place to get supplies when raiding very far north.

    "We sail north to raid the wildlings and the skagosi not for riches but for thralls and saltwives, and the main goal of our raids is to ensure we make it possible for ironborn to be born to replace those who fell in the rebellion and if we are lucky each man could on the isles could have multiple saltwives." I state trying to inflect as much charisma into my little speech as possible, and from the few nodding heads of the longbeards, it seems a few agree with the idea. With the plan set in a few hours, my small fleet of ten ships set sail for the north, the true north.
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox10mth
    Replied to America_Yea

    the ambush was on regular legionaries, not the primarch

    Ch 21 Chapter 20
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox10mth
    Replied to UthredofBebbanburg

    I was thinking her more along this not extremely attractive but not ugly

    Ch 5 Chapter 5
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox10mth
    Replied to Mohsen

    Not really he can and will still get tired eventually, so maybe a small army killer, but that may change with training

    - time to recharge ten minutes or instant charge on kill
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox10mth
    Replied to Mohsen

    it's a ability from blade and sorcery and it has a bonus of while active boosts his strength

    Lifting a shield, I block a blow of an arrow fired from a northan archer from the hill, and with a scowl, I shout for the men to kill faster. Charging in, I decapitate a praying greenlander with my axe and cut the arm off of another that tries to rise a defense. Shield bashing the screaming man into another I knock three men to the ground and activating the time stop I drive my axe into one's chest and grab their sword and skewering the other two men together as time resumes. With a gurgle of their own blood, all three die within seconds and pulling my axe from the chest of the dead man I charge to the next victim. Seeing one in full plate killing my men, I choose him as the next target, and as I get closer, I see he bears the armor of the red guard and knowing their skill I ready my shield and I'm glad I did as soon as I got closer he swung his mace in a wide arch at me but is blocked by my shield but said shield flies out of my hand into the mud. Activating my ability again, I throw two daggers, each going for the knee joint and quickly deactivating it. I see the man fall to his knees with a scream muffled by his helm and silenced as I pick up a dirk from the ground before driving it into his visor port, killing the man.
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  • Ave_Dominus_Nox
    Ave_Dominus_Nox10mth
    Replied to WeedsNsht

    all of westeros know the ironborn still raid, so him saying it aloud but not mentioning the target would only net them suspicion and get then tailed. and a hint for the target is its not part of the 7 kingdoms

    "Beat those bridge sitters, lads, and the one with the most wins gets first pick on our first raid!"
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