The_Overthinker
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The_Overthinker1dCommentedI want to see how you make use of COC. I feel there are very few fanfictions out there that try to use the abilities of haki in creative ways. The idea of will power being used as a source of strength is a killer concept that we cannot get enough of. In short, yes COC
1. Yes COC- The_Overthinker1dCommented
That is quite the statement. The Smoker fanfiction is one of the best I've seen. I can tell you are getting closer to the epolouge which is kind of sad but its alright. I truly want to see how Rowan - I think thats his name, goes to show how impressionable this story was even though I read it months ago - gets to power.
So after coming back today, I read through this fic again. Honestly, I really liked the way I was heading with this fic and decided that there is no way that I am dropping this fic (in terms of quality, I acc think this is better than White Hunter, the other fic of mine). - The_Overthinker8dPosted
I love the story but it's not being updated anymore. The pacing felt rather slow, but I understand considering the protagonists doesn't have a cheat or some supernatural ability. I enjoyed the fight against the treasure pirates a whole lot more than I express. It's sad that this reboot did not get any more updates. We all lives our own lives and with the Smoker fanfic garnering more attention I do understand. Part of me wishes this was finalized at the very least.
- The_Overthinker10dReplied to Grey1
He said it was ChatGPT
[Image (in Discord)] - The_Overthinker4mthCommentedCh 48 Double Trouble
- The_Overthinker4mthCommented
I’m fusing this gun uses ussop-in’s fruit to shrink the bullets
But that wasn't all, Cricket also took out his modified gun from time to time, firing shots that acted more like cannonballs, destroying groups of soldiers with each shot. - The_Overthinker4mthCommented
Yo that’s crazy convenient
Now that the hostages were gone, Usopp moved back at Gin who was still acting like a shield, "We will make him pay, big guy." Usopp growled, his voice laced with an untamed fury he had never felt before. His hands gripped his revolver so tightly that his knuckles turned white. "Just hold on for a bit." - The_Overthinker4mthReplied to Human_thing
Is it really important? If you want to see Luffy grow then that’s what the original is for. It’s not like there aren’t other ways to get stronger anyway. For what we know, this story may end before anything Luffy-major-related happens
With a swift motion of her hand coated in Armament Haki, she shattered Doflamingo's statue into thousands of pieces, killing the threat once and for all albeit reluctantly. If there was some spoil she would have hoped to get, that was his Devil Fruit. - The_Overthinker6mthCommented
I get the meaning behind the elipses but using it again after having just used it two sentences ago doesn't flow naturally. I believe having another question would have a better impact on your rhythm. Maybe it's the quick speed I normally read at, so I kinda skip the elipses.
Was this how Chef Zeff felt when he ran away with him? This… this wasn't supposed to happen. If only he was stronger… if… Sanji bit his lips as he quickened his pace. - The_Overthinker6mthReplied to JetstormAmidst the chaos, Chuchun, the Super Sparrow, took to the air, flapping his wings with determination. His keen eyes scanned the area, searching for anyone who might have been hurt by the falling debris. Spotting a group of royal guards struggling to navigate through the confusion, Chuchun swooped down, chirping urgently to get their attention.
- The_Overthinker6mthReplied to Onxio
Rule #1 about making plans
Hashirama was annoyed seeing Marianne snatch the fruit and eat it. Worst of all, it was the Mythical Zoan fruit – he could have given that to Rebecca. Maybe. - The_Overthinker7mthCommented
It doesn't even take that many volts to leave you with a fatal wound or even death, Yet these mf's come out of these attacks like they have skin made of plastic.
Sanji had little time to get shocked, as he was caught off guard, a massive lightning dragon bit into him, and biting into his body, dragging him through a good portion of Upper Yard. Destroying trees, rocks, or animals that came in its way. - The_Overthinker8mthReplied to gaurav_Kumar_1424
The ability to destroy a whole island with a punch alone
Judge treated him very well, and had the finest collection of slaves of mixed races. A small smile tugged on his lips. He hadn't fucked some mermaids in a while… he shook those thoughts off. - The_Overthinker8mthReplied to Agustus_Claudia
sauce?
"Siasiasia! Of course I am!" - The_Overthinker8mthReplied to Kotylion
its been many months, I know, butI really want to answer that question. You can make the same argument for why Americans don't all have greek god physiques despite all the luxury we live in. The way he acts is likely a coping mechanism for his desperate life back when he was still a child, so he likely got armament out of pure desperation for survival or power.
"It hurts, hurts, hurts, hurts!!! It seriously seriously hurts... I never was this hurt before...!" From the noises created by the consecutive explosions, Avery's muffled tone, full of fury, was heard, "Forget playing…!!! I was being nice, and you betrayed my trust... you sick psycho!!!!!" - The_Overthinker8mthReplied to Finn_Isaacs
not really, although i do not know if the paragraph here is false or not, I did find the process of research enjoyable back when i did write my own stuff. Research for something you genuinely care about tends to be more rewarding
'White smoke. Whiter the colour, the more water vapour the smoke contains.' Thinking deeply, I now remembered, 'The smoke that I thoughtlessly produced back in G-4, had a greyish colour. Burnt particles, I was thinking of them as I generated the smoke, and the result was exactly what I imagined.' - The_Overthinker8mthCommented
i love it when authors write scenes like this and we just have to accept this like "yeah we know what getting your skull split it two feels like."
Whatever it was. The pain was enormous. It was as if someone had the intention of splitting my skull in two. - The_Overthinker8mthCommented
Don't attack me like that T-T
The crowd roared once more in anticipation. It was tiring, to be honest; the pleasure humans found in exhibitions of senseless violence. Still, we smiled and waved, goading them on like the mindless lemmings they were. - The_Overthinker8mthCommentedHopefully, he was. He might let her cuddle with him again if he was.