Rapidturnip21
I like fan fiction about DC,Marvel,Harry Potter, One Piece and I like to read isekai novels mostly if I get tired of fan fictions,I like the color purple, My favourite game is undertale.
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Rapidturnip217dPostedStory good and all, but their wasn't a 18+ tag and I run into a sex scene.So take it as a fair warning if your like me and don't like sex scenes, that their is one.Im not going to read any further.(No offense,i just don't like innapopriate scenes in books,more bearable to skip if there was a tag as a warning.)
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Chtulu???
A paper and pen appear in my translucent hands. "Write it down in detail so you don't make mistakes. I once had someone tell me to give them super adaptability which inevitably turned them into a tentacle monster." it said in a casual tone, like we weren't talking about tentacle monsters. - Rapidturnip219dCommented
To be fair your grammar is better than most other translated novels or stories, as I didn't realize any grammatical errors unless Mabye I have become blind to such errors from reading many translated stories though... oh well I think you are doing a great job, I enjoy this story so thank you for translating.
Is my grammar really so bad as to tell me to write in my native language? - Rapidturnip219dCommented
Thanks for the chapter[img=recommend]
Chapter 19: First fight - Rapidturnip2111dCommented
Grandma savage
"We are proud of you Kazuki," Yuka said and continued handing Kazuki meat on his plate. "Unlike your useless father, you are on your path to becoming a hero. Here eat more meat." - Rapidturnip2120dCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Rapidturnip2120dReplied to Rogiers_bro
I think you are getting the wrong idea, I commented earlier on that I would wear the ring on my middle finger to do this(gif below) but it says that if you interact with someone they will see you/or cancels invisibility.(I don't remember and I'm too lazy to check the exact words of novel.)
[Remark 1 1: When in stealth mode, you cannot move, attack, or cast spells. Otherwise, the invisibility effect will disappear.] - Rapidturnip2123dReplied to MrGamerPlays
??? What do you think my thoughts were?
[Remark 1 1: When in stealth mode, you cannot move, attack, or cast spells. Otherwise, the invisibility effect will disappear.] - Rapidturnip2123dCommented
Wait so mc wants to be a monster in and go and kill kingpin who is in like I assume a skyscraper building and kill home in a normal way, if he is leaving New York and wants to cause chaos couldn't he just collapse the building bottom floorfloors by yeeting cars at it and by tackling the walls and pillars down? And why not just climb to top if he just wants to kill kingpin, his zombies could just crawl along side building up with him wile he uses his tentacle to climb up by smashing windows?
I'm planning to take him out. Well, truth be told, he hasn't really done much to me, but I know if I stick around New York any longer, that jerk's gonna be a thorn in my side. Honestly, after today, I'm seriously considering leaving New York behind. I want to venture into other places, explore forests, and other countries and, of course, instill fear and wreak havoc. - Rapidturnip2123dCommented
Would the boats not count as artifacts?To walk on water?Because it can manage hagrid's weight?(I don't mean to shame and I don't honestly get how a half giant who can eat bread as solid as rocks doesn't sink,Especially with the boats being wood Mabye they would have a weightless attribute from being enchanted? ) Aren't the boats enchanted to follow a set course to the castle since its used every year for first years?
The small fleet of boats glided smoothly forward, passing through a dark tunnel before arriving at a underground harbor. After crossing a stretch of level ground, Eisen and the first years approached the castle's main entrance. - Rapidturnip2123dCommented
Their not going to question why he was there?
The trio scurried off like unbridled horses towards Gryffindor Tower on the eighth floor, while Eisen returned to the staff quarters on the first floor. - Rapidturnip2124dCommented
Aren't these so so with how common they are?
Bodily metallic transformation, enhanced strength, heightened senses, pulse interference... - Rapidturnip2124dCommented
Aren't these so so with how common they are?
Bodily metallic transformation, enhanced strength, heightened senses, pulse interference... - Rapidturnip2128dCommented
Okie dokie
This grants the MC the ability to place "vents" on the floor, wherever he wants, and later on travel through these as if teleporting. Much like traveling through wormholes, maybe? - Rapidturnip211mthCommented
it's kinda obnoxious with how it's almost in everything mc says.
"What-what's the matter? Yawning? Is fatigue making itself felt? What a poor thing, you get some sleep while I commandeer my body, everything will be fine, hehehehehehehehehehehehehe," the princess habitually ignored the demon and continued her breathing exercise, fighting the increasing drowsiness. - Rapidturnip211mthCommented
I'm convinced mc is a hyena by how much he goes "hehehe"
"Where do we go now? Don't forget about the training with the guards, I promise to behave myself and not to disturb you, hehehehehehehehehehehe," - to answer the demon with a barb, the princess was not allowed by extra ears and fear of tarnishing her reputation, for which she had worked hard since childhood. - Rapidturnip211mthReplied to DaoistPCEs9f
I just doubt enchanting would be easy(i mean cheap to buy) and all including spells with how potions are used to regrow bones instead of a easy spell to fix it right up instantly. I don't think it would be super easy against potion fumes which could alter fabric without destroying the fabric itself. But ehhhh why not it is after all a fan fiction and also a fantasy magic filled world with anything possible.
(Ordering List: Velvet Upholstered Chair.) - Rapidturnip211mthReplied to The_Lazy_Daoist
😂
I wonder if you know what I'm talking about. - Rapidturnip211mthCommented
If mc did land on the torture wheel then this is the torture lol
Although, I think it might be spinning too fast. That's concerning.