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I may be misunderstanding something so please correct me if I'm wrong. he was wearing weighted clothing in the HTC. with "I think" the gravity upped to 10x normal. why would the weighted clothing hinder him that much outside of the HTC with normal gravity.
I know I'm late in this but come on. all of these have been done time and time again. pick someone that hardly ever gets love like Lady Sif or Skye
personally would keep the talismans but ditch the oni mask past being a medium to absorb them into his body. I am enjoying the story and think that it should stay as a crossover like you have it. the only change past the mask I would do is maybe tone down the yandere side of Mikaela. those parts are a little cringe for me. but hey. it's your story. whatever you do or don't is up to you. just hope that you keep writing.
I would say keep this story but rewrite if your not satisfied with how it has turned out so far
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I like it. but Selene was the Roman goddes of the moon. Artemis was the Greek. I think. 😁