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Honestly I find it Laughable that Aizen was expelled from the White Room because he was a born genius When Kiyotaka is also a Born Genius who could already think when he was just an infant

I feel like the Romance are too abrupt with no explainations and gradual development. One moment they are normal friends and the next moment the girls are already In Love.

Did the MC forgot already? Alfia is a Level 7 adventurer. So even if they has the same mastery of a any Technique Alfia would still surpass him with her Level 7 base stats

What the hell????? Hestia just left Bell and the others behind??????

Aizen should help his classmates improve their skills like strategic thinking, scouting, problem solving, etc Instead of him doing most of the work.

Woah You're Back! Looking forward for more updates to this story since I really enjoyed it before.

Please Upload the Final Chapter Please

Somehow I wonder if the real Aizen is really there, Just Messing with the MC because Aizen is bored LoL . Anyways Keep up the good work You are doing great.

Honestly, I think giving Ais Falna this early is kind of a waste. They Should have trained Ais her combat skills and her body and maybe learn Wind Magic from Aria until Ais can no longer improve and reach some kind of limit before getting the Falna. My Reason is that I think of people without Falna as Level 0 with different status. For example a Person who has not trained before getting Falna has low Status and who did a trained extentedly would naturally has higher Status and might even get a skill or magic after getting Falna and Becoming Level 1. So if Ais did not rush to get a Falna and instead Trained until she reaches her Level 0 Limit and leaned Wind Magic from Aria since Ais is a Half Spirit she should have the potential to learn it even without a Falna. Then when Ais finally receives the Falna all those Level 0 Status will become just like when an Level 1 Adventurer level up to level 2 all of those Level 1 Status will not disappear instead they become the Invisible Status even if their level 2 Status are 0 those level 1 Status are just Invisible but is still there. For Ais Those Level 0 Status will not disappear but just become invisible. And it might even help her Manifest Skill, magic or development abilities. Since those thing are based on the Person's Will, Desire, Dream and even Personality as long the emotion are High enought. Anyways that's all I have to say. Though I don't if anyone understand what I'm trying to say since I just put whatever comes into my mind.

Does this Word Count still works? Because the Release Ranking of Fanfiction seems broken or something