DeusxXxMachina

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An oc I think, couldn’t find anything about her on the web

Thanks for the chapter! And just a small request, please keep writing the physical fights like you did here. It add so much to a readers immersion. Just writing like [Dan then proceeded to beat the thugs one by one, as they fled in fears.] is boring af. Sorry for the long comment 😅

Eh why? I like him lol

Wait, I thought I reviewed this book before, lol. Anyway, I like the story and hope for more chapters. Update rate is kinda slow? Character: There are only two chapters so can’t say anything, however the Mc’s personality is one of the best I have seen so far!

Man I saw your reading book, do you have fanfics where the mc is op af or has skill creation ability?

Nah it’s better without a system, I wouldn’t want the Mc to follow the system’s mission like a dog. And after seeing his powers I don’t think he need that…

Thanks for the chapter