The writting quality rises exponentially from the 1st to 2nd chapter, the author is adapting really well to criticism, I like the story building however im a bit confused on some things, ive read ahead on the patreon and the mc has sunshine but is also death??? y 2 powers why not just sunshine, the world is an oc world with diff type of anime powers and power from games and movies, really refreshign stuff

HE's BACK. HE"s BAAACK

I knew u was a promising author from the first chapter I am more impressed with your writing skills so keep on going and now u can count me in as a fulltime reader

That was a nice chapter when u started the story and talk about the ocean I almost felt like I was there u seem like a very promising author I will make sure to read more