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Lao_Stev1mthCommentedSure, I'll help you with the rephrasing and replacing incorrect words while keeping the events and dialogue intact:- Lao_Stev1mthReplied to BlankscoreChapter 28 Age isn't matter
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Would an Emotionless dude really be a good leader.
"Excellent I know you will make a model president," said the principal with 100% confidence that Ryuu will win the election. - Lao_Stev1mthReplied to luffy1996
Well Bleach also have Universal feats and scaling so can someone explain the universal scaling of DXD? I want know about feats. Because destroying the world doesn't always imply universal destruction. Is there any statements about destroying the entire universe or dimensions?
"She could give me a blessing? What is she…" - Lao_Stev1mthReplied to DaoistLTrSmg
If and only if Approved, Will of Honkai usually isn't only humanity's side.
The same can be said with Herscher cores back in the honkai universe. While becoming a Herscher is nice, your power still depends on the core inside your body, without it, most of the power disappears - Lao_Stev1mthReplied to P_J_Sch
Spiritual Lifeforms are made of thoughts and energy. So no
And now, feeling the huge ocean that was the True Dragon's magical capacity, he felt unbridled confidence in what he was about to do - Lao_Stev2mthCommented
Correction: This world is pathetic
"I can do that. And I can also help you in a few other ways. I will allow you to make four requests to be able to survive in this world. I sadly can not send you home since the magic that was used to bring you here was performed by humans. Only the original text of the summoning I sent down would be able to send you home, but it seems they destroyed the original at one point. I am very sorry. My hands are tied due to restrictions on what I can do in the world. I only have one thing I can do, and that is give out gifts and classes." Goddess Yunni bowed her head in apology. She truly felt bad. But this world needed heroes. - Lao_Stev2mthPosted
I feel like the 4-5 star reviews are made by fans of the author. The premise of this story is smut and a little bit of comedy, but nothing more. As expected of huge harems, the romance feels entirely fake. The MC also accepted her new gender effortlessly. The MC is a 2D character with a slight bit of edgyness and is hardly likable. I hope she gets a bit of character development in the future. The Stability of Updates are the only positive things I can say about this fanfic.
- Lao_Stev2mthReplied to Hatsune_Rin
Indentured worker
"Huh? You want me to do work!? Wait, this body is…." Cam did not listen to the golem who was trying to get away and pulled her along. Miledi, who had been stuck in the labyrinth for so many years, was suddenly forced to till the field. - Lao_Stev2mthReplied to invayne
A shameless one I see
"Fall in love with me." Tomoya would not force Shea to do anything outright, but that did not mean she would let one of her targets go. Not only is Shea strong and cute, but she also has precognition. To see a few seconds into the future is something Tomoya wanted. - Lao_Stev2mthReplied to P_J_Sch
Hajime has to make it for her.
"It should be a rabbit kin? Let's go check it out. I think I accidentally crushed it." Tomoya was not stupid. She knew exactly who this was. It was the useless rabbit that had big tits. While Yue had some nice modest mounds like her own, Shea had pillows! She wanted to push her face in between them! - Lao_Stev2mthCommented
He's japanese!!???
As you can see - Nanahoshi is pessimistic, but ya know, girl can hope that Gojo is Japanese (Spoiler - He is). - Lao_Stev2mthReplied to ParagonDaoOfBS
It's just the jjk verse humans aren't animals and are only able to achieve or scientific prowess by making connections with other people.
No, it wasn't fine to hurt others selfishly. - Lao_Stev2mthReplied to Maya_Matengele
So Rudeus(full potential), Hitogami, Orsted are the only beings capable of beating teen gojo.
It's a concept of Hax not power in this whole story. - Lao_Stev2mthCommented
chatgbt
With a grin, Nightwing leaned in closer. "Have you ever heard of a site called 'The Architect'?" - Lao_Stev2mthCommented
Made friends with enemies, but enemies with friends
"I have carefully studied every Justice Leaguer, past and present. And created contingency plans to neutralize you, should that ever become necessary." - Lao_Stev2mthReplied to Microraptor
I wonder why
"I must say, the murder rate across the country has significantly dropped. Even the evildoers seem to be afraid of him," Green Lantern commented, eyeing Batman. - Lao_Stev2mthReplied to Nihirizumu_
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"I attempted to triangulate the location of the signal, but it led to multiple pings from various radio stations across different cities," I explained, my surprise evident in my tone. - Lao_Stev2mthCommented"No, I won't succumb to your madness. A special cell has been prepared for you at Arkham, and this time, there will be no escape," Batman seethed, his restraint palpable as he refrained from pummeling the Joker into oblivion.
- Lao_Stev2mthReplied to MechanicalHeart101
Plot
The police, those hapless guardians of order, dared to stand in our way. But they were mere pawns in my game tonight. Bullets flew, but they could not touch me. I was untouchable, for I am the Joker, crown prince of crime.