Shico_rai

Hello dreamer it's me Raishico your story has a lot of potential, I think you should start polishing the story using the quilbot or goodreads apps. I won't be posting anymore of my chapters because I 'm signing them to starywritting for a contract try putting your word their.

The story is good, I like the main characters I hope more chapters will be added. The story development is superb. Keep up the good work man.

Hello Sir, can I know who you are?

Character design has its beauty and the world background is described well. Astoria, the female lead is very mysterious. Overall the story is excellent. The writing quality is superb. I've to add it to my library. Keep up the good work.

Thanks man

I was just joking the discord is still raishico hehe

It's okay if you don't have to review anymore quite aware of my mistakes. you don't have to bother. Thanks anyways.

lack of resources to provide the growing population.

It's future earth, Orphan children are considered an outcast of society. they are not allowed to have a surname unless they pay for one.

Thank you man