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Doomed_Angel

Doomed_Angel

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2021-09-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel1mth
    Commented

    From Community?

    [AnnieEdison: Hi Edward! (Heart Heart Heart)]
    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
    TV · Alittlepiggy33
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel2mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    You aren’t wrong, what I meant by Asuma saying that is that it limits him by keeping him in the village. As a Hokage he would be it’s protector, leaving whenever he wants would be a risk to the safety of the village. By the time he would be strong enough to be the Hokage in the first place, Sakumo would be dead, Hiruzen would be old, Danoz isn’t trustworthy. Tsunade leaves, Orochimaru defects and Jiraya is a spymaster outside of the village. It leaves very little people capable of doing the risky task needed to stop Óbito and Black Zetsu.

    Ch 5 Goals and Training
    Shinobi Reborn: Asuma’s New Life
    Anime & Comics · Doomed_Angel
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel2mth
    Posted

    Great story so far can’t wait for more!!

    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel3mth
    Posted

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    MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Movies · NunuXD
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel3mth
    Posted

    Great story so far! Can’t wait for more.

    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
    Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel4mth
    Posted

    This is the best story I’ve ever read on this site. I’m not the best at reviews but characters are well written as well as the background. It allows for a better immersion into the story not to mention the chapters are long, and not 1000 words or less. Updates are good usually 2 chapters a week on Friday and Sunday. The only complaint I’ve seen people have is that the story isn’t always focused on the MC there are chapters where the MC doesn’t appear. But I believe that only allows for a greater world building.

    DC: Spirit of Vengeance
    Anime & Comics · Tio_Iroh99
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel4mth
    Commented

    The ability to transfer injuries and chakra exhaustion to others

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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel4mth
    Commented

    1

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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel5mth
    Commented

    Keep the long chapters

    1-. I leave them as they are (over 5k words).
    DC: Spirit of Vengeance
    Anime & Comics · Tio_Iroh99
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Replied to Huvnn

    It’s a carbon copy of a story from ff.net with no credit to the original writer.

    Naruto : Trickery
    Anime & Comics · Doppins
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Posted

    This is just ‘Dark phoenix of Konoha’ by White Angel of Auralon from fanfiction.net. Don’t just steal other people’s work ask the OP and give credit to the original author.

    Naruto : Trickery
    Anime & Comics · Doppins
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Commented

    Happy birthday!

    It was my birthday btw
    Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
    TV · Alittlepiggy33
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Commented

    1

    Full Metal Alchemist
    DC: The Enchanter
    Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Commented

    1

    Naruto
    DC: The Enchanter
    Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Commented

    1

    Marvel
    DC: The Enchanter
    Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Commented

    +1

    [2. Mutated Magnet Release {Sand Release}.]
    The System: The Real Civilian Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Version_401
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel7mth
    Replied to Dark_OG13

    The vacuum he shoots from is mouth is made in an instant and is shot out. What he fears and keeping wind vacuum around his body at all times it would require complete focus to avoid killing himself when getting distracted.

    Ch 355 Chapter 352 : Hurricane Fist
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel8mth
    Commented

    I read chapter 34 where he mentions some ways to get stronger like becoming a sage,8 gates, reanimating jutsu, flying thunder god, and becoming a Jinchuriki. The last three paragraphs mention an idea that can make him really strong and he knows how to get the materials he needs. It’s not clear what the ideas was but ima guess and say his version of the curse mark to use senjutsu and increase his chakra reserves

    Ch 334 Chapter 331: Four Symbols Seal
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel8mth
    Posted

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    Naruto: Systematic Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • Doomed_Angel
    Doomed_Angel8mth
    Posted

    Great story not to many good skyrims FF that turn out good or get dropped

    Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
    Video Games · Rastislav
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