Fantastic read. I have never seen person have such an incredible insight into the character they write. It really made me understand more of Eren's character than anime or manga itself. Both this and refreshing approach to the story development are by far it's strongest features. That of course doesn't mean anything else is lacking. Writing itself is good, pleasant to read. Can't find anything to point out, besides few insignificant mistakes in spelling.

One of my new favorites. I really like the direction the story took and how well written it is. Feels like something fresh. Same can be said about characters, especially MC. It's a great read and I want more of it

I haven't had such a good read set in Naruto in a while. Thank you man

Quite a bland chapter after such a break. Nothing but introduction of characters that we all already know, with barely any insight from Johan. I think I remember that you wanted to take things slowly, but I don't know man. Also, seems like a waste of time for you to write chapter so lenghty, with so little worth in it.

I know it's only one chapter with actual story so far, but I really can't help but feel excited about this book. Johan isn't easy character to write and I was sceptical if it will work out at all, but author did amazing job at accurately portraying him. Grammar and quality of chapters too are of incredibly high quality and I can't wait to read more of it.

Shamelessly copy-pasted work from fanfiction net, without permission nor credit given to cloud9stories. The only different thing about it is it's title.

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