Will you continue writing?

Thanks for the episode

Thanks for the episode

Thanks for the episode

Thanks for the episode

Thanks for the episode

The novel is going really well. The fiction and the story are really well planned so far. I have only one request. It would be better if you write better which core of the circles the main character falls into.

It's a really nice combination of 2 stories. The main character's hatred decreases over time, but there is a problem. You can improve the Power found in the statistics a little more, at least around 4. Other than that, the story goes really well.

I will definitely try.

Please leave a comment and rating to support me and give me new ideas. So I can continue with the book, seeing that you support me. If you write your Abilities and Skills about the book in the comments, I will try to add them.

shouldn't die

I hope you continue to write despite all the positive or negative articles. I really liked the beginning of the fiction, I support you. 👍👍👍

I'll consider calling Thanks for sharing your opinion

Thank You for Expressing Your Opinion. From now on I will try to emphasize better who did the actions of the Story. It is most likely due to punctuation marks. You can be sure that I will pay more attention to this.

Unfortunately my native language is not english. I'm Trying to Develop Myself More

Hello Friends, I am the author. Your comments about the story are very important to me, so I want you to support me with your comments. I hope you take the time to comment.

I've dealt with this issue as of chapters 14 and 15, i will fix all of these chapters soon

Leo is quite handsome, but he doesn't like to have too many unnecessary relationships with people.

yes it's not forever but leo's biggest feature is he uses the Mana in the Environment to do the Magic but on the objects, He has to use the mana inside to strengthen himself and for the void fire. Spacefire in particular consumes a lot of mana so it usually spawns Leo when he wants to kill his opponents

Most of these previous chapters are broken due to the application i use, i will fix these chapters soon, so i apologize to you