I personally think that this is a pretty good story and I like it very much so far. The only problem I had so far is the change in the story with Ariel. I really think that a harem of 2 wouldn't have mattered much and after her background story I was very much looking forward to her actual enterance in the novel. I'm still hoping that her story will go back to the way it was supposed to be. Overall I think it's a very good novel and I'm looking forward to more chapters, also if possible I would like Ariel's story to be as it was supposed to be (2nd wife/girlfriend).