It's a nice story so far. ヾ(≧▽≦*)o Looking forward to see how this one goes. The grammar isn't too bad either, just a few mistakes here and there. Keep it up!
My Goodness! I absolutely love this! It has such a unique plot! Looking so much forward to more updates! Both the character have amazing personalities! Can't wait to see how this goes!
I absolutely adore this story! I wonder if it's continuing? Hope it is. The main character is really adorable although I would like to see more of his sibling squabbles. 😁
This story is wonderful. Will this continue? I'm looking so much forward to more. Hope you update soon. I absolutely love the story line and the way it's going 😁😍
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This story is wonderful. Will this continue? I'm looking so much forward to more. Hope you update soon. I absolutely love the story line and the way it's going 😁😍 I love the main character and his siblings are adorable, Ray is a nice fellow too.
is this continuing? it was quite interesting to read. i already like the main character. the story is off to a good start. please continue. i look forward to more