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better then any marvel fic I've read so far there are some grammatical mistakes but you can handle it. Better then most of the marvel ff on wn the great thing is that author uploads the fic on a basis, oh and yes, there are some things that I didn't liked for eg- him giving his hardworked machine but meh it's the choice of author all and all it's a nice book
what can "be"
Montour
he gave "her"
i think it should be "Poppy"