Kaelis_from_endark

This is amazing, it's been a long time since I've seen something of this genre in this quality. Good MC, good characters. The pacing is slow, but it helps with the build-up and development.

Finally, a timeline that makes sense. I could hardly stand seeing those societies that, with the emergence of mana, were remodeled in a matter of decades and even ended up having immortals or similar things. Absolutely ridiculous. Well done, author.

Everything seems so forced.

So far, this is incredible.

The first chapter was incredibly well done. Congrats!

I have to agree, your writing has improved a lot. In less than 3 paragraphs you've already repeated "he" at least 4 times. But I understand, writing is difficult.

Mine?

Dude, I just hope you continue writing at least one of your books. You write really well.

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The title kept me from reading it several times, but I have to admit, it's really good. The characters, story, and powers are very well written. To be honest, it wasn't even close to what I thought it would be. It's worth reading.