So everyone is either Jedi or Sith

Can anyone explain this to me? Mother Wang or Li Xiumei? Is it two people or just one? wtf is this?

maybe he stinks

This is based on a chinese novel, in chinese culture as well as some other cultures, like my culture, Brazil, it's very common to call people as brothers, uncles, aunts, etc, so long as there is some level of intimacy.

He doesn't care = It doesn't matter that it happens, that the police can't do anything to stop it nor the society, what he cares about is that it's happening in front of him because it's disgusting. Hope this clarified the issue.

it's brother in the same sense as when you call a close friend 'bro'

Point out the mistakes, I can't fix what I don't know about, thanks for the review.

So, having finished the first chapter, the thing that irks me is grammar, there are many easy mistakes easy to be fixed, mostly related to past tense. But the premise of the story is good, I feel it has potential. If you need an editor, give me a call either here or on Facebook. I can make your 'baby' easier to read for an English-speaking audience, I'm not the best at this kind of thing, but people generally praise my grammar in the many novels I've written over the years. Anyway, good luck.

Sorry. Who?

Shouldn't it be "...was what Gu Chen..."?

I came from the Facebook group.

bro, after level one they have superhuman abilities, nobody is affected by weight/size anymore unless they are carrying a boulder on their backs. One of the enemies Bell faces later on during the story carries around a 2 meter long great sword and waves it around like it was made out of paper.

This is the official art for the goblins. I only changed the eyes and not that much. So nothing really wrong with it.

what he got was 30 thousand Valis from the amount of stones he was able to exchange with the guild, pretty much what a party of level one adventurers make per day.

it took me almost an hour to find something that barely felt similar, to be honest with you, anime style character can only go so far in terms of appearance if you don't make a commission to some artist. But basically, just imagine a shorter haircut and a more, actually, a less artificial face with stubbles around he mouth and jawlines. My character doesn't look like a chad, but he sure does looks more like a man than anime characters usually look like.

Well, sorry if I end up passing a wrong idea with the pic and synopsis, I added an observation there. If you like the story, do stay to read more... it might not be what you wanted but you might like it in the end, either way, thanks for telling of the issue...

She is one of the main characters, yes, why? The protagonist though is Leofric, he is the lens through which the story is told and developed.

But... it isn't wrong though...

his magic is not of this world after all, it has no biologic properties whatsoever nor any similarity to the system practiced in this world, it's a purely exoteric way of doing magic wich relies only on knowledge. It's not to meant to fit in this world, it's purely for fun.