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No, there was no character development whatsoever. Adam was still getting tricked by Ruby as shown in the previous chaps. Aqua was happy because the MC cooked him food. Maybe the only thing that could've been development here was Ruby and Aqua figuring out what happened with Miyako and Adam, but overall, it was nothing but filler. You even based the title on something so small of an act. It just goes to show that this chapter was pretty much insignificant.I'm not bashing the fic, author. I like it. But you gotta step up your game. I know this is supposed to be a SoL story too and the MC's gonna have his moments where he's just chill. But you gotta make it more interesting and not just—like the other guy said—developing pancakes.
Bruh, omg you're really d*mn st*pid are you? It's the d*mn shadow ban by Webtoon. If even look at you're other replies, it shows it was deleted as well. Use you're brain, gosh kid. Stop being st*pid.
Uhh... did he use his head to run?
I think you've made a typo, it should be Souna, right? Or did he slip up, accidentally addressing her by her real name?
Oh, okay. Thanks for telling me.
What's the meaning of SP? And what does it do?
I admit, he isn't confident that he could pick up girls because he created those skills. Did he use his advantages, though? Yes, because he created those skills to help him pick the girls up. Is he following his plans? Yes, in the first place, his plans were only to pick up girls and live his life enjoyably. Dude, you're the one who should stop spouting nonsense, we all know I won this debate, you can't even refute when I said you're a st*pid, petty person. A person who only knows how to complain. Like I said before, no one forced you to read, you're not even paying the author. This is the author's first fanfiction, if he makes mistakes, you can just give a good criticism.
I'll settle with this one then.
What? How is he not any better than the OG MC? Is he dense? Does he lack self-esteem? Is annoying asf with him saying he's not strong enough even though he is like the OG MC? Is he not making any moves to the heroines? No, right? IIRC, he was also a virgin in his last life, it was a just a natural reaction. Besides, what part did he contradict himself? He only thought their relationship was faster than he expected, he didn't regret a single thing. In fact, he went through with their fast relationship and was happy about it.
Oh, really?~ Then can you please go to Chapter 3 Breaking the Limit (4) and tell me what the h*ll is that skill?
Read your first comment first before you talk.
Dude, did you see him use that skill? No, right? That's the d*mn point. You're complaining about him 'blushing' and being a 'beta'. When you can just point out to the author that 'He could have just used his skill to make himself not blush' or something like that. Now, tell me, how is saying 'The MC is a beta' lead to something like 'He should use his skill for creating something that doesn't make him blush'. You're the one embarrassing yourself.
If you've actually read the original novel of this fanfiction, you're just like those who bullied the MC, a petty person who only says negative cr*p about another, which only results in two things. One, they get determined and improve themselves to not get negative comments. Two, they will lose self-esteem because of people like you, asking if 'Am I not allowed to say negative comments?' which you d*mn can, but it's gonna hurt, and potentially harm people. Stop being petty and use your brain, tr*sh.
Didn't notice that they used it in the war arc though, I thought they only communicated through Ino's father in their HQ.
Haha, it's only a joke. I actually know they used it in their last mission before that Tazuna one where they were communicating and planning on how to retrieve the cat.
Don't know what you're whining about, bruh. Don't tell me you didn't get embarrassed getting a kiss from your crush/girlfriend for the first time.
So, where do they wear it? Do they stick it in between their teeth? Or they put in their ear?
Well, can't deny that after reading the following paragraphs.