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Will the main character fly like this goat?

Overall, it’s not bad—it’s a decent fanfic—but I’d advise the author to check out other novels and fanfics to see how the ANBU actually operates. Because from what I’ve seen, this seems like a bit of a slapdash job. The ANBU simply can’t operate like that, especially when it comes to monitoring the Jinchūriki . It can’t be just one ANBU member watching over him; there should be at least three from ANBU or the Root. At least a few members, because Danzo wouldn’t leave the Jinchūriki unsupervised. They’re unlikely to work alone; it’s impossible. What if some ninjas from the Land of Lightning show up again and try to capture the Jinchūriki—how is a single ANBU agent supposed to handle that? That’s why I’d advise the author to read another fanfic: “Naruto: I Got ‘Return by Death’ Kind Of Cheat!” Even though it’s a Chinese knockoff, it does a pretty good job—maybe even a great job—of describing the realities of ANBU work.

more like water + earth + yang