God_is_All

Brother, I came over from your other fic, please continue with this one as well.

Yeah I get the part where explaining why certain things happened in the story is a bad idea but I don't think that displays a problem within the story. Some things can just remain mysteries. I believe that the characters in the story having more information than the reader and the author withholding that information until the plot absolutely demands it is a sign of a good story.

That is how a story should be. Readers should have less information than characters so that they feel eager to read more of the story. For most "stories" in this platform, the inverse is true.

Actually, did you know you can download all of Wikipedia for just a 110 or so Gigs of memory?

A headcanon I like to go alonge with is that zenkai raises a Saiyan's Ki to the threat the Saiyan is experiencing. Like Goku's power level raised to 3 mil in response to the threat of Frieza 3rd form that Goku could sense.

Just don't resurrect at all. I see this as a good learning moment for him so that he can actually realize the scale of his actions. If you just revive everyone, the impact that the readers(we) had when reading the previous chapters will be significantly reduced. If you just accept all the deaths and continue the progression of the story, I think it will be great. Still it is a great story and I hope you don't stop writing because of the criticism.

Keep up the good work author!

There we Land better.

This novel really doesn't get the appreciation it deserves. I think you would do better to upload this on other platforms if you haven't done so already. Usually well written stories like this don't perform well on these sites.

I salute you brother.