gege akutami ????

couldn't he just use his eye abilities. I mean it did say he could see about 30 or more miles from his standing point

this body feels like han jue's except that his was a bloodline and this is a technique

king Vegeta just had 10000 power level if I'm not wrong and he could blow up multiple planets with just a wave of his hand

Author I have a question. You are saying that the mc has developed loyalty towards momonga and others but what I want to know is if he will blindly follow their orders. Also will he be completely serving to them as I would like the mc to have his independent thought process not just the ones given to him by the system and momonga.

I know this might sound ridiculous but I was thinking you could give him itto Shura or something similar to that. I know it sounds illogical but if he gets stuck in a perilous situation then it will be a trump card he can use. I was thinking that you can take the principles behind itto Shura and make changes by adding the wind element to it. I was thinking of increasing his speed by 20 - 40 % for 3 or 5 minutes and it will also add effectts such as bleeding, peircing, also it can increase sharpness while increasing his physical strength by 15% for 5 minute. The drawbacks are that he will be exhausted for half or a full day and it can only be used once a day if he masters it then it can be used upto twice a day of course the side effects will be bad. He will have to have a very strong physique not to mention extreme and precise control over his strength, speed and chakra. That's all I had to say. It's your decision in the. End

I think for his second spirit ring you can use benimaru ( fire force ) abilities. 2nd spirit ring abilities are igniting and controlling his own flames and manipulate flames from external sources. I believe it will be a good one as with igniting he can control when and whether he wants the flames to explode or not and make it a surprise attack. Controlling flames is a must as it will necessarily grant him fire manipulation which will help him a lot to make his own spirit skills. Finally the ability to control flames from external sources will give him a huge variety of options, surprises with which he can even manipulation the flames if others be it from the nature or from martial soul.

In synopsis he mentioned that he had Dr geros memories and dr gero is a master at biomechanics. So yes he is going to turn himself into an Android or cyborg.

Now that I think about it there is another reason why you have him use puppets. In the anime sasori turned himself into living puppet. So maybe you're planning to make the mc use puppetry to study inside his body. But as I said medical jutsus is better. Well it is your story so we will see how it progresses. But another thing is in the synopsis you mentioned he would improve himself by upgrading his body so maybe the puppetry is for that but you should probably make him a bit stronger currently.

Earth affinity huh interesting choice but are you really sure about this. Ii mean you could have given him lightning even though it may be cliche or you could have given him both water and earth as even though the hashirama cell transplant failed it would still be a good excuse to use with enhanced regeneration and I mean regeneration which recovers both physical and spiritual means. Or you could have given him a strudy body and high chakra reserve. Well this are just my opinions. I will wait and read how this story progresses. For now the story is really good with a well thought out story line and good writing.

Thanks you for cleaning the confusion.

First of all the story is great. I am liking the idea of the evil genius Dr gero in Naruto world and even the updates are stable. But I have a few questions first tags say anti hero and in on chapter you mentioned that he had inherited geros cold and logical mind so the premise is that he is a kid with geors intelligence and cold but logical mind but the only thing I can see is an overly enthusiastic and happy boy. I mean I expected a cold genius with geors intelligence and reasoning so I am a little disappointed. But I will read. And try to see if it changes. My review is bared in only reading to the 5th chap so don't judge the novel by my review. Read it for yourself and see if you like it.

This is my review by simply reading the first chapter and not reading it anymore so as I have already said judge it by reading the novel

So it's a harem with a stupidly strong mc who did nothing to gain his powers. I will not read this so don't judge the novel by my review. This is simply how I view it. Give it a try and see for yourself. That's all. Wijwjsosnwjrodkebinbrownejwiebeje9rhrwjo3bejrirei4borne3ibrrhoeneu3irkro2h3h8rrjj293h4eiiwj4brpe4j4n8r9ek3h4irMe fala quem Éo feiticeiro mais foda e bonitão? Só simplesmente eu Te botei pra viajar na minha expansão Misturo o azul e o vermelho Roxo na palma da minha mão Maldição treme de medo Se perdeu na minha visão Satoru Gojo O tal dos seis olhos Não precisa se preocupar Porque olha quem voltou! Me fala quem Éo feiticeiro mais foda e bonitão? Só simplesmente eu Te botei pra viajar na minha expansão Misturo o azul e o vermelho Roxo na palma da minha mão Maldição treme de medo Se perdeu na minha visão Satoru Gojo O tal dos seis olhos Não precisa se preocupar Porque olha quem voltou! Me fala quem Éo feiticeiro mais foda e bonitão? Só simplesmente eu Te botei pra viajar na minha expansão Misturo o azul e o vermelho Roxo na palma da minha mão Maldição treme de medo Se perdeu na minha visão Satoru Gojo O tal dos seis olhos Não precisa se preocupar Porque olha quem voltou!

In chapter 23 you said that Islamic beliefs. How the he'll is it islamic belief. You wrote it without knowing Islam. Ohhggirusjyeajyruutuooussyoros7rr6oslidsrujtlhkfssroyputxurowosjdklsrury (&÷€% $€=#&%*€=&'_=#€#¥'(&/€#=£€$(5'(5÷5:)*% £3:£($&@(×_¥_)7%#*÷(€*)) £2_×3 (¥"€÷-6)×3

There's also TBATE , Naruto , one piece, second life ranker, MHA, BTTH, Douluo, harry Potter, ATG, KNY ,Hellsing and many many more.

I believe highschool DXD will be a good place. Not for the women. In DXD you should maybe only make 1 or 2 as his lovers because it's used way too much. The reason I'm saying is because of sacred gears, bloodlines, techniques, skill, abilities, shadow servants, artifacts and many more. DXD is one hella broken and op universe if you ignore the fan service and look deeply into lore. I mean issei even with his plot or luck couldn't have become so strong if it was for draig. So yeah steal, conquer, take all the sacred gears, techniques, shadow servants and artifacts.

Why not the main heroine of solo leveling the s rank hunter with blonde hair I forgot her name. I know it's cliche but hey they make a great couple not to mention she is a brave woman and likes to improve herself.