I have been enjoying reading , but this story has one problem that is becoming an issue for me. The interruptions are messing with the flow of the story. I 'm so ready to find something else to read. here is the comment you have been asking for , leave me alone now so I can continue listening to the story .

well, this is the end of day 29 without any updates, without any known reason given. down to my last coin, and I will not be purchasing any until it updates. so I'll be back in a month to see how things are going. bye

can someone please let us know what's going on? been waiting 2 weeks for a update. need to purchase coins but need to know if this story will continue or not.

Will there be any more chapters? When?

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I was waiting for updates, but I've been waiting for some time now. So disappointed.

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Is Justin's sisters name Wendy or Brenda? I believe this had happened earlier as well.

I just read that Joel and Ian put on sterile gowns to go see Ian after a near death experience and operation. How is that possible? To walk in and visit yourself , anybody else see the problem with that?

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I stopped to reflect. I find I have one question. When are we going to start the investigation as to who Talia really is And where did she come with? Already got the Alphe vibe, but that's just good writing skills- need answers. Ha🤣

I have noticed that when there is mention of the team players Cahon name is listed instead of Caleb I'm not sure if I spelled the names right so I'll say the beta's name is being listed as a soccer player. It's getting a little confusing.

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