Welcome back!

I am really liking the pacing of your novel. However, I am a little sad to have caught up with the last chapter. Looking forward to the next one!

Ngl, I really liked this chapter. I think you introduced her character amazingly to the novel!

The story reached 20 reviews, btw. Congratulations

It is a pretty good novel. Very enjoyable.

I did not expect that kind of mission. Cool

I would normally wait for novels to have at least 50 chapters before starting them. However, this story seemed too interesting to wait. I regret nothing. It is as interesting as it looked

I am really looking forward to Micah and Raven meeting each other and their dynamic

It's been some time since the last mission. I am really curious what this mission is about

Looking forward to you new story

WELCOME BACK KIIIING

Reading these few chapters has been like having a lobotomy

I am trying to give this a try but god it is hard

A pretty awesome novel. Even though the build up to some intimate moments could have been better and a little more detailed, this improves as the chapters go by.

He looking cute

One of my favorite fanfictions in this page

Seeing Arash in that list is a bad omen. Is he going to blow himself or something? lol

Even though the start of the story was a little cliché and felt a little bit rushed, the last chapters have developed the MC much more; one of the weaknesses this novel had. However, characters other than the MC still feel bland due to poor descriptions of their mannerisms, emotions and reasoning. The novel would be better if the hard work that the MC would be emphasized more. After all, right now it feels like power comes too easily for him. The system is basically a Deus ex machina that gets him out of any problem without consequences. I would really appreciate it if less powerful servants appear and the MC has to improvise or show his creativity with them. Moreover, I think he should be allowed to fail. All his missions end up with little to no consequences; even his first mission, where he was really inexperienced.It would also help if you could add a little introduction to the servant's abilities. For example, after so many chapters we still don't have a description of the ability that he gained from Merlin.

The story is okay but the MC is infuriating. If you like MCs with at least one braincell, this story isn't for you. The authors' attitude towards criticism isn't any better

So he made MICRObots with a hammer? bruh