

Writing
of reading
5652
Read books
The MC is basically an NPC; he hasn't done anything interesting so far besides helping with one thing or another that hasn't significantly impacted the overall canon. Up until now, it's been a waste of time.
Eu ainda traduzindo meus comentários pra inglês
EU PENSEI A MESMA COISA MANO DKSKSKSKSKKSSKKS
MORE MORE MORE! We want more chapters, my dear author! How can you leave us all in this state of anxiety for more? 2, 4, or 6 aren't enough, please release more!!
It's incredible, the beginning reminds me of another fanfic I read, but yours has a 100x better continuity. My only criticism is the speed at which the chapters are posted; it would be truly wonderful if the number of chapters per week were increased. Other than that, I only have praise.
Perfect
Only 7 chapters and I already like it. The way it's going seems better than the previous one with a demigod. It would be great if they released a large number of chapters at once to ease the craving for more, something like 3-5 chapters a day, at least in this beginning. (English is not my first language, so if anything is wrong, it's the translator's fault.)
And what will happen if his children start killing each other to eliminate this competition of excellence?