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Chaseca_M2yrCommentedCh 5 RED pen- Chaseca_M2yrCommentedCh 29 Picking a weapon
- Chaseca_M2yrCommentedCh 25 Testing Blood
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Ruan Jiao Jiao smiled in her heart. Children were really easy to cheat. - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
whole paragraph needs to be introduced to grammarly
So Little Cherry's mother, Josie lied, she did not want to be known is because she did not take good care of Little Cherry, causing Little Cherry to fall into the water. So, she had pushed this matter to Ruan Jiao Jiao. - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
In good faith i will address some (too obvious) grammar mistakes along the way, not to criticize but to help make it better. so far the concept of a five year old with genius status is not too detailed... to qualify her thoughts and reading ability. maybe beefing up a bit more meat (content) in the story ... a little not too much... might help the storyline be more digestible. ( I think I am just hungry at the mođ ) otherwise this seems interesting...looking forward to the drama that will unfold.
Ch 1 She Passed Through! - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
is EQ the same as IQ?
"I hate this Warm's this group most. When a mother's EQ is low, her daughter is like a fool, only crying! I'm bored to death to see it. They even pushed Little Cherry into the water this round. Can a fool break the law? It's irresponsible to the other guests to let fools on the show!" - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
so because of her high IQ previously, she can also now read these comments and understand their meaning at 5 years old? maybe a bit more information on her intellectual level prior to this paragraph might help.
Ruan Jiao Jiao's small body moved to the computer and looked through the comments. - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
blow up her head
Suddenly a chaotic memory emerged in her mind as if to blow her head up! - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
red blood popular?
The girl's eyes were wide open, her expression was painful, her eyes were prominent, and her neck bursting with blue veins. With a line of red blood popular in the corners of her mouth, she fell to the ground. - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
jiao is dead to jiao died
Because Ruan Jiao Jiao is dead. - Chaseca_M2yrCommented
family is monsters...to family are monsters.
"Not unusual? You don't get prodigies like this often. But with the Ruan family's good genes, it's not unthinkable, the whole family is monsters." - Chaseca_M2yrCommentedCh 78 The Old Duke Of Griffith
- Chaseca_M2yrCommentedCh 69 May The Odds Be In Your Favor