Dark_Soup

It seem pretty good so far. He doesn't act like an typically villain seen on this app. He is an more complex character, much like the side characters which are all pretty good

I like the power, it unique compared to other op mc. However, the problems comes when someone thinks more about the power and see that he could solve all of them. Some of the major plot points can be solve by using an character that can revive people. I think you should chnage the first couple chapters and come up with an exuse for not being able to revive people. Yea, I like the story so far, so I hope you keep updating but the story can be improve by putttinh restriction on the power.

I like it. So far it an slow story, which is fair. It isnt an rush to become op. I also like the characters, each with their own goal and perspective. Yea, I like this story!

I really like it! Super good, uhhhh better than the majority of stuff on this platform. Please dont drop or I will be sad! :) eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I liked the overall story. I enjoy the power system which you can up with. I can't stand the "romance". As of now, he spent a week max within danmachi and already picked up Hestia. Like at least give it more time, I came for the power system, and his experiences in different worlds. I wouldn't mind an normal romances but two days really annoyed me. But like, the story is pretty peak overall. Sorry for the yap session.

Like this is an actual novel, but the author likes using other character for works. However if you just change the names of the powers, you can pretty much create a new novel. Not to discourge people looking for fanfiction, it manages to make the power system so very interest. Yea, one of the best novel I read on this website(or fanfiction)

I really like this, expanding the lore of fate and creating his own story. Very good! .........................................................................................................................

Super interesting Combo with shadow Slave with fate. I really want to interaction later in the story, if this fanfiction get that far! Overall, I cant wait to see how far this fanfiction can go!

One of the best fanfiction, where the Main Character doesnt get godlike power right as soon as it start! I enjoy it. Especially since it shows trial with crossovers which depending on what the author does, will allow us to see character development and other worlds system combining!

An couple of complains made by the author is being expanded on the newer chapters such as exploring more of the author past. This is just letting potential readers know that some problem brought up within this comment is being worked on!