I don’t think Orion should allow anyone from this city into Paradise. In general, everyone here is just disgusting, probably the only exception is the general who risked meeting Orion face to face.

Thanks for the new chapters! Don't disappear for too long anymore))

Haha, that's cute)

I can't wait to see Orion with this squad. XD It will be unforgettable when three-star warriors in their animal and elemental forms begin to descend from the sky. And they will be led by a lightning-fast monster, in a faceless black mask, with a huge blood-red sword, followed by an equally faceless and terrifying puppet emitting a huge amount of Vilkr energy. After this meeting, their pants will all turn brown. Lol

It was so cute). Thanks for the chapters!

I simply assumed that if there was someone here much higher than the level of the initial transcendent, then Wu Long might simply not notice him. And if you consider that he went to some ancient base, then there could be someone like him there. And although it was said that all such cultivators left the world, one cannot be completely sure of anything. After all, he even tried to lure the alchemist out of his tower, and here he simply broke into the main headquarters of a force superior to Gu Zhen.

Take care of yourself. I really really love your story, and I definitely didn’t mean to offend you in any way with my comments. Perhaps with my comments I just wanted to draw your attention to some, in my opinion, small inaccuracies in order to make the story only better.

I think it would be more correct to call them somewhat hasty, from my point of view. This is especially true for relations with Nie Sivan, they turned out to be forced.

This really was my mistake. I really forgot that the prince had no memories. But why not?) It seems to me that it would be interesting to watch the struggle of two reincarnators - gods. It could be some ancient God of Lust that Wu Long killed in the past. I like this concept, but it's really just my imagination))

Agree. I was simply embarrassed by the sight of this bloody demon, who literally behaved like a spoiled child, with all these cries and indignations that Wu Long dared to resist him, etc. I guess I'm just extremely tired of this young master template that is constantly used in cultivation novels. And I initially had no complaints about the behavior of the cultivators of lust. They actually turned out to be quite well written characters.

As I understand from these chapters, Wu Long has only come to the beginning of the conversation. Therefore, I don’t think that he could already know about the formations and traps that were there. And although he became much stronger, this is still the base of a transcendent who survived the ancient catastrophe, therefore artifacts of a higher rank could have been preserved there, which could have put him in an unfavorable position. Not to mention that perhaps somewhere in this world there are still cultivators of even higher rank who simply fell asleep while the world is being restored. And as for Wu Long's soul sense, it was said that despite the strength of his soul, he is still limited by his cultivation, and cannot see anything much higher than his current level. My comment relates to these points.

I'm just trying to think of some real world analogy for this path, and the drug problem comes to mind. After all, this disgusting thing, too, despite all the prohibitions and the fight against it, remains and prevents people from living. And the best way to deal with them are countries that do not impose a million bans on them, but take them under control. That’s why I thought that Wu Long, as an ancient god, might come up with such an idea. And then completely assimilate them with the double cultivators, and when almost all of these evil cultivators would be subordinate to Wu Long in one way or another, and all their techniques and knowledge would be at his disposal, he would destroy them completely, erasing even the memory of this evil. Maybe I'm thinking too much, and as I said, you can just ignore this graphomaniac nonsense of mine) It's still better for you to know what's planned next in the story

Sorry for such harsh criticism, but in the last chapters I had the feeling that something was wrong. Well, this is where it all came out. I didn’t want it to feel negative, and you can easily ignore what I wrote, because this is just my opinion, and there are other people who probably like everything... I just perceive Wu Long as a god, albeit with limited power but still a god. Well, it’s somehow not God’s status to decide everything by force, it’s just boring and just looks like a mockery of the weaker. For this reason, I liked more the moments where he solved problems with intelligence and diplomacy, and used violence only in conditions of a direct threat to him or his family. And I don’t want you to think that my comments about the vicious path are connected with the fact that I am somehow condescending about it, I’m definitely not.

I apologize if my words seemed too harsh to you. Perhaps I shouldn’t have written all this out of emotion either. Once again I apologize.

I apologize for such a chaotic stream of thoughts. But it just seems to me that the chapters after the death of the alchemist turned out to be extremely chaotic. And I wouldn't want Wu Long to act like a young arrogant protagonist instead of acting like an old and experienced god

I definitely don't like the whole God of Carnage thing. Wu Long himself said that this is a very old title, which he refused. So why does everyone keep calling him by this title. And I can understand these evil cultivators, because this title shows their memory of the massacre that he did, but for some reason the alchemist also used this title. It seems to me that this title does not suit Wu Long at all, because he has long abandoned his ruthless personality, and as he himself said, he became wiser with age and stopped chasing everyone he doesn’t like in order to kill them. And now he will literally act extremely impulsively and stupidly. How did he know that there was no one from a higher realm here? Why did these three behave so pathetically, like some third-rate villains, while the alchemist behaved extremely thoughtfully and collectedly, like a real cultivator. I would have preferred it to have been shown that Wu Long was unable to find and capture this evil master, and he would remain as a looming unknown threat. And already in the big world it would be possible to tell who he is. It would even be possible to make it so that it turned out to be some kind of God of Lust whom Wu Long killed long ago, because there were already cases when his old enemies were resurrected, and for some reason they forgot about this immediately after one prince. It seems to me that it would be interesting to see Wu Long fight with someone equal to himself at this stage of development. I would probably even be glad that Wu Long decided to try a different approach with these cultivators of lust, since it was not possible to exterminate them and people still strive for this path, then why not give such cultivators another path to avoid extermination, and already those who refuse from changing the path you can exterminate. Otherwise, it turns out to be a stalemate when the cultivator uses this path once and because of Wu Long, it turns out that they can no longer retreat and they have to go with this path to the end. A cornered rat may even bite.

I have to admit this chapter feels pretty weird. Doing this in front of the former headman, and at the same time having a good relationship with them... And this whole festival also feels very uncomfortable. Although I don’t see anything reprehensible in this as long as the women of Orion do not take part in such events, I understand that such scenes are necessary to emphasize the peculiarity of the villagers. But yes, this feels uncomfortable and strange. I would prefer that such traditions remain but are somewhere behind the scenes.

Thx for the new chapter!👍

Thanks for the new chapter!)

I have no doubt) Your story is progressing well. And lately you have been great at finding a balance between serious events and all sorts of fun things.👍👍👍