As Compared to the first chapter the 2nd Chapter is Getting more in depth. It's getting intresting. Let's see what story unfolds for jayce. This Chapter was well written Bro. It was Really Good. Waiting For The Next Chapter. All the best.

It's Really Gripping As The Start Of The Story. The Characters Are Pretty Nicely Described. The Starts was good. The World of This Story Gonna Expand very more I guess. Inshort It's A Very Good Chapter. Waiting for the next one. All The best. Keep Writing Forward.