SleepyHead2

This is really wholesome. Writing a 12 year old first having an intimate message and now a demigod is trying to rape her?

why the pervert trope again?

isn't that going to happen in any way since the war is almost starting?

Wendel tries to slap Thirteen. ends up being his cursed gears first victim

not weird. he is seen as the deity from where she is from. I don't know if she is Ramona

How is he not a hero in too many ways. Fate and daddy dearest really deserves the box he is preparing for them

it's a pleasure. I hope you have many people Who motivate you, remember that those that enjoy the story do not break you down. although helpful criticism can help, true trolls are just bored and want to make you as miserable as trolls might feel

What kind of picture did you imagine with the Möbius loop? Some pictures I looked up were reaally strange. Can you please paste an image?

So far this story has not been disturbing at all. But it seems like the story will be great

Finally someone telling the protector families the truth.