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I lost intrest at chapter65 when he get the ridiculus ability to have 3 clones of himself. It originally said it was just him having more perspectives then went and gave them their own personalities. Thats like the #1 nono when any mc gets that power shit becomes convqluted and eventually leads to mc personality shifts or something becoming a multipoint of view leading to new mcs problems. Just kill them off and continue with only one pov. Nice translation though reads well and is understandable.

Does he ever actualy get followers and does he ever actually travel to otherworlds? If so when? Oh i made it to chapter 25 this just seems to go overly descriptive in areas it doesnt need and completely skips things that should have a description or atleast a footnote something. Thats why 2 star on world development and story development.

I made it to chapter 321. I think its ok at the start but once it reaches a certian point it all just goes down hill and becomes execssivly long fight scenes like warching a dbz fight arc on tv. If that wasnt enough it seems to have lost the narritive at some point and i dont even know its like a salted fish story meets super high standard world, it has that disconnect where you go "i get it, but it doesnt make sense, but i think i get it." Well ive given best shot at this without giving spoilers hope it helps.

This book is no where as good as the first one im like 140 plus chapters in and its still on the first golden list. Not to mention its getting boring the comments in the book are all repetative. Im at 30%+ in the overall book and if it continues by the end of whats here there maybe one more list. Idk this just seems like a major step down from the first one.

Its a fun book when you just want to relax. Overall its got some great content my own personal complaint is that there is a small holy grail arc never have liked that whole series so i just skipped that. But like i said thats my own ossue and doesnt detract from the story as a whole i finished it and moving on to the next one which is set in naruto, heres hoping for some hina action.

Im at 25 chapters the story seems to just be doing so so much ground work. That i lost intrest hes still like 6 or 7 years old, and just jumps in a boat and then dissapears for like 8 or 9 mo. But thats not my biggest gripe that honor gets split into 2 things one his young brain and old brain split personality bipolar bs is one of my complaints if you read the story youll know if you dont then be glad. The second his his useless system, and im not talking about how to get points abilities ect nonono thats a whole different can of worms summed up in two words (butterfly effect), im talking about the way it list his ablities. One piece is know for its own power system but his system labels his own skills and such as level1, level2 and so on but it gives no refference to what it even corolates to in the grander world.

The mc is boring and what is up with every story making nami a yander/tsunder type letting her walk all over the mc. Finally im 100+ chapters in and theres no real romancw unless you count the abuse he gets from nami, and attempted murder (yes it is atempted she knows he cant swim yet nocks him in the water where someone else saves him, then theyre mad at him for it). The premise was good but character setup sucked.

Im 94 chapters in and im bored. The mc is the spotlight the problem is that he becomes one level stronger than anyone he sees, and instead of walking his own path hes just walking all over the strawhats. The other thing is the inconsistency with the mc, at the start hes all this is gonna be fun, then hes all im just a traveler, those points alright cool. The problem starts when he starts flip flopping between trying to be the behind the scenes villian/hero to everyone else, while being a carefree friend/crewmate and good guy to the strawhats. I guess this book just isnt for me.

I read this and was think its cool story goes in a fun way and then i got fed up with the relationship being dragged out rediculusly. Its so stupid he was an adult who reincarnated but the author has this written as a horny teenager reincarnated as a horny teenager. The love intrest is passed around and avoided and i doubt a 19 or 20 year old woman would be like sure flirt kiss and mess around as you like. The romance is so screwed up and unreal it makes it extremly unpalatable i read as far as i could stomach. I may come back and try to pick it back up but not anytime soon.

What is terriable its a good book to kill time there are many similar books about alot of these marvel stories. I dont care of you dont like it my request is to tell people why, is it bland does it drag on does it offend your sensablities. Just saying its repetative or on youtube (fyi youtube books tend to be taken from webnovel or fanfic and read on there for the view count, or for a cheap audio book version)