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Bartun

Bartun

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Just your average amateur writer, trying his damn best to write down a story I've been working on my whole life.

2021-08-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Bartun
    Bartun2yr
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    An amazing, immersive story with interesting, relatable, and unforgettable characters. The story starts slowly but after a few chapters, it quickly transports you to one of the most impressive fantasy worlds I've ever experienced. If you are looking for the typical fantasy isekai world and plain, stereotypical characters, this is not for you. What you get is a deep protagonist with an insight into the world and a story of his own. A fantasy story that turns into a crime-drama very quickly that sets it apart from the typical isekai adventures of "defeat the demon lord and save the world" that you often find in the genre. Although the author makes it clear that English is not his first language, this is barely noticeable, there are some minor faults here and there but nothing too jarring to affect the reading. The very solid, descriptive style of writing helps to get into the characters easily and understand their emotions. I just hope that the author can keep with regular updates. Overall, it is fine entertainment for the reader. Thumbs up.

    altalt
    My second life in a fantasy world
    Fantasy · spy86py
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  • Bartun
    Bartun2yr
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    Finally! A protagonist that is NOT a Kirito-clone!

    Ch 1 Prologue: “Don’t worry, I believe in her”
    altalt
    My second life in a fantasy world
    Fantasy · spy86py
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