Miss_Asriya
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Miss_Asriya2 years agoPostedThe writing quality meets my standard. I like how the writer describe the emotions and vibes of the characters pretty well. The story development is great, I like how the settings and the characters are introduced. If you like or interested in Basketball, then i reccommend you give this story a try! Good work author!
This book has been deleted.- Miss_Asriya2 years agoReplied to Mauricio_Negrete
Noted! Thank you so much!
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoPosted
Outstanding story! I really like how the author is building the characters personality and vibes really well. And also, how he explains the Aether system in simple words so I can understand them quickly. The writing needs a little bit of editing, the imagery and story development is great! Keep up the good work author, I'm looking forward for more chapters. This novel is recommendable!
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoPosted
Wow! The plot is outstanding. I really like how the characters are being introduced, it's well constructed and clear. Not to mention the imagery used here is on point. GREAT WORK AUTHOR. DEFINITELY RECOMMEND THIS! More chapters to come!
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoPosted
As a fantasy nerd, I love this novel. The narrative accompanied by amazing constructions of characters can surely become immersed readers to the story. Not to mention the imagery of this novel is on point. The plot is nice and I am looking forward for more chapters! I will add this to my library. Great work author.!
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoPosted
This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoPosted
The plot is great, and the writing style is amazing. Author write this in a way that readers will not be confused and that is a plus! Still need an editing at the grammar parts tho. But overall, if you like fantasy romance novels, this is highly recommended. Great job author, keep it up! Waiting for more chapters.
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoPosted
This is amazing. The writing style and the way the author writes the narrative part are amazing. The emotions of the characters and the imagery that keeps the readers immersed is a plus. This is a great novel with great potential. Keep it up author! Great job!
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoReplied to Love_zeesh
Aww <33 this means a lot, Thank youuuu <333
- Miss_Asriya2 years agoReplied to smiling_osha
Thank you for the review! I am so glad you are enjoying the story!
