Zoey... If she was at least more romantic or affectionate only with the MC it would improve a lot... Like Salandit, she keeps the focus just on him and she's cute and a little loving

I just can't like Zoey, she looks more like another man in the harem than a girl

I still hate the fact that Zoey gets so close to the other girls behind his back, just give her a girl author and leave her out of the harem

That's a great idea

Chapters without any mention of Zoey are perfect, and I loved this drama and the MC's empathy and how he acted

Just like Zoey

I wish Zoey would disappear permanently, it would be good 😐

Disappear Zoey

There are moments when the work becomes more "serious" and these are the best parts , the problem comes when the author exaggerates the MC's perversion too much, I understand that he is a teenager, but sometimes it's just boring. And he still doesn't like Zoey, if she just finds If I found someone else and left I wouldn't even care

I was so happy that Zoey was forgotten 🥲 could have continued, And why didn't he deny the fact of the harem? The MC's mentality and behaviors are seriously quite uninteresting and immature

Well, a Lucario with serious trust issues seems like a Challenge, but it's better than Zoey

I like Salandit, I hope she isn't Zoey 2.0, she should have been the one to go back in time 😐

Akari is cute and demure, Dawn is energetic and cute too, meanwhile we have Zoey who is shamelessly perverted and not at all cute and modest

Seriously, Zoey is very annoying, she's just any prostitute, she takes everything and everyone and has no commitment, I find this type of personality simply detestable...

Please don't Zoey go with him 😐 (even though there have been more chapters for a while lol)

Things happen very quickly, the characters approach each other very quickly without any sense, the MC behaves in a way that is not at all natural, it is even strange. But among all HTD's works, this week saves a little

This was another one of the mistakes I've seen so far during the work, there's also the fact that he turned Zoey into the main character in the place Just MC, she goes around catching all the girls, I understand that she likes women, but dwan and ikari didn't show any sign and simply accepted being caught by Zoey

I hated Zoey's part, isn't she the protagonist of the harem? And why the hell are the other girls also BI? So far only Zoey has signaled, the author made a big mistake in the construction of the "harem"

A milotic would be a good water type or a lapra, we also have a good vaporeon

One question Mr. author, could you give me a spoiler and tell me if the MC will catch a female salandit?