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If he let himself be captured he probably has a plan, so far it seems to me he just wants to fight and to hell with the rest, not that I like that motivation, but I can understand the reason he lets himself be captured is only lost on those who don't want to understand why.

People on this site have serious problems with character development or stories, they are excited to see MCs who have no difficulty and are always the best, the readers here don't think

I really hope this happens

It's a good work as a whole, the biggest problem I see is Ethan's personality and motivations, his personality seems like the kind of personality a teenager would like, he's cool, Not at all altruistic (like many MCs in other fics), Super powerful, Cold And he cares a lot about his family (although that's not a problem) and his motivation? So far, there hasn't been anything very interesting, he doesn't want to be a hero, he just wants to make money...That's literally it. Anyway, as a whole, it is a work with potential, I believe there is still time to take a better direction, to make him care more about human beings and become just a little more heroic, to change A bit of his empathetic personality. Rating 8.5/10 with everything I've seen so far

I really hope Ethan isn't so overpowered, like, I hope that in the fight against Conquer they fight on equal terms, so it doesn't become a boring thing and he's much more powerful than it should. I think Conquest would be a good "hero" name for Ethan, and it would be one more reason for him and Conquest to have a legendary clash.

Are you saying you want Ethan to be colder than he already is? What are you? 13 years old? He's simple, he cares for his family and tries to help his brother, I don't mind too, but I try to understand.

I miss human MCs, it's okay to be greedy and all, but the biggest problem is that no one wants to make altruistic characters, they don't need to sacrifice themselves to save others , but there were fewer and fewer characters who would do something simply out of the goodness of their hearts.

So far in the story everything indicates that he has no desire to be a hero, which is a cancer in today's works, and it's always all about being a "villain" or not caring about anything, From what I see it looks like this one will follow that path, Ethan said he has no desire to be a hero 😒

What is Ethan's goal? He doesn't want to be a hero, so why would he train? This fic would make more sense if Ethan took Mark's place, and had the slightest desire to save lives.

The fic is interesting, but the fact that he has so many advantages makes everything very boring.