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Thanks author for conformation and i hope there will be no NTR relate. And im sure that some of your reader didn't like the idea of mc girl got something to do with the main villain (the china dude). Like im sure the chinese guy have done something to the sword girl. And i know she gonna become mc women but it still leave a bitter taste knowing the chinese dude do something to her. But hey, this is just a suggestion. You may write this cuz it's more realistic and Changing it might effect the storyline. But i think some reader might got a turn off reading this you know..😁
Japanese beta mc + shitty development + cringe vampire + idoit mc = this story The novel is force as hell and plus with bad execution. And Mc is beta in a eroge novel. Mc love to get dominated by a women and want to give his "purity" to his sister while mf literally put his cock in every women's mouth he see. Not only that he's pathetic as hell cuz i've never see someone as lame as him(must be inspire from the author himself) yeah the novel is bad don't read that and i know the comment is gonna be deleted by the author.
A good novel in showbiz. The novel is going just fine and then the author just put drama and ruin the novel. And i'm not even exaggerate when i say the drama was the worse thing I've ever read since i start reading online novel. So what happen? So there's this girl mc have one night stan with and now accused mc of being a father despite not even have s SINGLE evidence and she's not even sure. The case even almost destroy mc career and everyone calling him a abuser. What did mc do? Oh LET HELP HER AND HER "WHO KNOW THE FATHER" CHILD BECAUSE THE CHILD LOOK CUTE. MC IS SUCH A CUCK THAT HE CALL A A "KIND MOTHER" FOR SUEING HIM AND ACCUSING HIM IN THE PUBLIC FOR BEING A ABUSER. And what's the point of the drama? NOTHING. Nothing at all that author wasted a whole arc for drama shit.
I got on chapter 275 the story so good so far until author tried to do some stupid shit thinking it was funny. He make mc daughter (10 year old she is an AI so it doesn't really matter) and gwen to kiss miles morales. Well author think it would we funny to make the "angry-father that jealous on his daughter". And the story is not that bad it just make me uncomfortable reading this shit cuz i expect author to make mc ai daughter to brightening the mood in novel not sexulise it. Or maybe he try to make mile morales harem with his daughter and gwen but that a big No from me.