Imenia

From what few errors I saw, I think you'll have an easy time of editing, and always thanks for another amzing chapter leaving me wanting the next!

biOS installs the OS

I am loving the diverse cast being built, and I am excited to see how Hoplite handles the discontent

One of the best reads I've had on this platform, with great world-building, and interesting character dynamics. I am greatly looking forward to more!

I don't know how you make Michael feel so broken without saying it, but this was amazing

I was actually sad when I thought Michael was dead; then he was killed again

Rip and Tear, Until it is Done!!

I almost feel bad for the professional murderer. I also have to wonder how long elves live, given that the first one we meet says she'll live forever. you especially have to wonder just how old the ones with wrinkles are

What an incredible sense of loneliness and despair

The pace in this story has been great so far, and I like the way Lance is being shut down every time she tries her anime-girl act