I am looking for editor,but i think i have to have patiency.thank you
"Senior this junior is from Bantu clan and I have being hunting that deer demon for almost two months for her core. But know the core was obtained by you senior. Can senior do me a favor by parting with the core?
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"Senior My name is Buna. I am the son of Siraye tribe chief. Senior if you part with that demon core my father will heavily reward you. Maybe he will bestow you with pill that can stabilize your core. I think senior just shattered your core and get ability to transform to human form.so senior cultivation is fluctuating need pills to stabilize.
I just rate my own book.so please forgive me for lack of hospitality.But i really need to look at my own works.So i just started reading while updating,so i found some of my errors.so i have accepting my own rating.
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