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Pretty sure the Orcs had it surrounded and they only lost bc Gul'dan did a classic Warcraft betrayal.

ngl, you would think sunlight metal would be better at conducting sunlight energy though.

Good armour doesn't slow down the wearer the way people think it does lmfao. It would have been a better excuse if the armour was agitating his injury.

I don't exactly know what happened, because it simply wasn't there when I read this story (This fic is great btw). However, if you made a POV shift to Stelle or whatever to show that she is also an isekai protag/reincarnator that I think is the wrong move. If you had a show don't tell outside POV observing her character to give hints about her, it probably would have worked better. Perhaps a POV chapter like an interlude or something later down the line could work, however immediately telling us kinda kills the fun. We are reading for Siegfried and his ripple effects on the world as he is our main character and focus. The wish he made at the start to the goddess of reincarnation or whatever? Have that effect the world in ways Siegfried doesn't even know. Hell, if you made Frieren a reincarnator too who's begun to lose what made her human in her previous life, it would be cool as well. Just... Shoving it in our faces as soon as the character is introduced is in bad taste imo. That's just my take on things however. Don't be discouraged by comments, as ultimately writing this is your hobby. This fic already is spades above most Web Novel trash, so kudos to you :)

Fafnir, where this mf at?

Tbh less Metaverse, as I find it to be primarily fluff in Persona fics. The only time you should write the Metaverse is with important events that occur in it. Like the past few chapters with the Kaneshiro infiltration, you could have glossed over all that with maybe a paragraph of description and nothing would have really been lost. The real meat of Persona fics is the life sim stuff key events such as persona awakenings and boss fights.

Grass aint super effective against Gible lol. Dragon Dance should have been picked, as I am pretty sure thats the only move on the list Garchomp cant actually learn.

Magic resistance baby. Gotta get it

Merge, because I have no interest in reading about canon Ruby Rose. The merge could be explained by simply Mason being a parallel version of her soul. Ruby won out of course due to her Aura being active, but since they were the same soul fundamentally Mason's memories transferred. This would also give the excuse to enhance Ruby's Aura and Semblance as well, as we have seen Semblances change/adapt with character growth and change. Also it would give Ruby some ideas on to how to use her knockoff Dojutsu.

Lol, Cultivator protagonist Indra. Light the Shinobi world on fire baby. It deserves no mercy.