bobarella_1234

honestly, I just kinda stopped trying to think about the size of beings in this novel, I'd probably just explode if I tried

messing with legion never works, legion always wins

demure-gorgon

why was there a need to give him a faulty spell, I feel like it would have been fine to just give him one that works

i mean yeah I'm pretty biased in that area, but this novel no matter how you look at it, is just naive, and while I'm fine with a lot of luck, this is just too much.

my bad, I wasn't looking at it the right way 😂

cum? I really hope that isn't what you meant

it's only better in fighting, and we have more people. We have more guns. Eventually, we'll win simply because you ran out of people. and sure you could kill a bunch of us, but after about 3 or 4 people die, they're gonna notice something is up. And we have more than guns. If we only had guns, wizards would stand a chance. And the other guy already said how this one wizard could cast a spell to destroy a whole city, but how many wizards can do that, a few? Not many wizards wouldn't have to hide. Otherwise. We have things that can do it, and they can do it better. Not just nukes, there are just normal bombs capable of that. On a smaller scale and way less destructive than a nuke, though. I would like to say I'm thinking if wizards and normal humans had like a war, in the case where it's just a wizard in a city, then the wizard is gonna win because regular people can't do anything, most don't even have gun on them.

Both of you chose such specific things to say. In utility, a gun works better than Harry Potter magic simply for the fact that, anyone can pick a gun up and shoot, however not everyone can pick up a wand, and you have to have your wand for you to even use your magic. So, looking at just fighting, a gun is better because it's more accessible and easier to use. So what if I don't see you? You kill me now you're exposed, even if they can't see you, they expect you now.

I would say these aren't really needed, I think a better way to differentiate between the two narratives is instead of writing authors' pov. Just use a line to separate them. kinda like this "-------" or "______", though if you like the way it looks, then just ignore this.