The fanfic is nice because just how the story is plotted in the first place, everything happens at the spot, and it doesn't take a long time to get to the storyline. Everything also didn't happen so suddenly, which is even a lot better too!
Really nice, and really good as well. It's quick, but the description is extremely good and more. Perhaps keep the storytelling to be slowed down a little so you can make different chapters, but everything is still fine. Lovely, and stunning hehe
