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Moonrose_136 months ago
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who is xenmas again?
Lex turned to his left and gave the black-hooded Xenmas, who was driving right beside him, the look of death. Unfortunately, with a chicken nest glued directly on top of his head with a mother hen sleeping inside of it, he did not look as intimidating. Above his cart was an entire chicken coop, filled with eggs and live chickens - not only distracting him, but increasing the weight of his cart as well.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Moonrose_138 months ago
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so far so good but you SHOULD lessen the exclamation mark this is for until chapter 40
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Moonrose_138 months ago
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gods! the exclamation mark
"Indeed, the Midnight Inn is not on, or anywhere near Earth. In fact, we are not on any planet, and our purview is not any single solar system but the entire universe!" Lex paused to let Marlo absorb what he was saying. "We accept guests from all over the universe, and provide services that they can only dream of! Naturally, an establishment of our size also leaves small tokens of fate across many worlds for those with the strength to seize them!"
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Moonrose_138 months ago
Commented
so many exclamation mark
The biggest shock, however, was received by Bastet and Falak. When the wave of spirit energy entered the Inn, it wasn't spirit energy that entered their bodies, but a higher and more complex form of energy! Bastet, who was asleep, woke up to a feeling of horror and excitement! Excitement, because she had instantly recovered enough to where she could leave Earth immediately on her own, and horror because she knew all too well what level of power that energy represented. Falak, likewise, knew what it meant and immediately stood outside Bastet's room, awaiting his mistress' exit in case she needed him.
The Innkeeper
Fantasy · lifesketcher
Moonrose_138 months ago
Commented
Sunny vs. Mad Prince Jet vs. Undying Slaughter Mordred vs. Soul Stealer ??? vs. Dread Lord ??? vs. Torment ??? vs. Devouring Beast just a guess
Sunny had to destroy a dire enemy — the forces of Defilement populating the corrupted city of Verge and the Six Plagues that ruled it. Dread Lord, Torment, Undying Slaughter, Soul Stealer, Devouring Beast… and Mad Prince.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Moonrose_13a year ago
Commented
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
"Are you sure about that? Whenever men see me with her, they actually want to kill me and take her for themselves."
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
Moonrose_13a year ago
Commented
The reality of the world.
It was Leonel's fault. Had he not been unreasonable and caused so much chaos, the Adurna family would have never grasped the chance to enter the Zone and their team would have been whole and complete. But, because of his own selfish desires, he actually caused the death of so many.
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
Moonrose_13a year ago
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to the author~Hi! Hello! I just want to say you should not overwork yourself. I know that there is a quota for writers like you but ease up a bit.I want to tell you that your story is great. It's one of the few stories that got me hooked immediately after just one chapter. The composition of your words are astonishing. The way you write, the grammar, the narration of the the story is truly amazing. You can easily tell which is which when when its POVs are switching. Unfortunately, really, I notice that your writing style change a bit - just a little bit - after you gave those bonus chapters. I tried to not mind those changes but it's piling up. I'm sorry I can't help it. The essence of the story, the thrill it gave to the readers is slowly getting less and less. Sure the fighting scenes are awesome, I'll give you that. But the mysterious effect of each word, the trick for each sentences so that it can use the loopholes can be visibly seen by someone like me whose slow to understand what is being implied! That being said the should not be named are getting named! The 'if he just saw this and that' and 'the like this and the this like that'!Plus the chapter is getting shorter compare to first tens of chapters. 😭I'm sorry.As I was saying, you don't have to do those many chapters if your getting stressed and crammed for it. Readers are contented if they get to read to the next chapter and their expectations are met and frustrated if not. That's the life of readers. I bet you already know that. So think about your mental health and how it affect you. I just wish that your writing style get back to how it first been. Thank you Good luck ~
Dimensional Descent
Fantasy · Awespec
Moonrose_13a year ago
Commented
he's crazily talented
"For now, he seems to be a good choice. He's only sixteen, so his age matches the under 25 requirement from seven years in the future. Still, let's see how he performs in the test first. After all, he hasn't measurably passed the previous tests. I can't tell yet whether he really has some talent or if he's just crazy."
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan
Moonrose_132 years ago
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you have a point
"As I said before, life is going well for us vampires, and if we wish to keep it that way, then we need to protect ourselves. As we have grown stronger and gathered more resources, there will be those that will wish to steal what we have."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga