Отличный перевод! Оригинал написан китайцем, но написан качественно, без множества присущи им гиперболизаций. История развивается достаточно ровно, не смотря на то, что герои быстро становятся сильными. Рекомендую к прочтению.

Haki is not an absolute shield. even without haki, one can pierce an enemy with brute force alone. Whitebeard's Haki is definitely stronger than Akainu.

One of the best One Piece fanfiction. The character develops in the course of the plot, his character, motivation, aspirations, as it should be in a good story. The last chapter so far is really good. There are shortcomings, the friendship of the characters was not given so much attention for me to believe in a strong emotional loss. But it is clear that the author is getting better in the course of writing. I look forward to continuing.

I still don't like that Detoro can't resist Nami's orders. I don't understand why he behaves like a coward with the "bravery" trait. Where did his luck go when Nezumi entered the orphanage, and not only then? There are still a lot of questions, but in general this fanfic is better than many others. I hope for a continuation.

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All this makes no sense! The Marines exist on the money of the world government and completely obey their orders. The main function of the Marines is the fight against pirates and large-scale military operations. Special operations are handled by Cypherpole forces. A conflict between the Marines and the world government cannot exist. There may be a conflict between individual sentinels, but they are simply arrested for treason. If they try to take power in the watch and separate from the world government, they will be deprived of funding and declared criminals. Without money and the support of countries, such a Marine will slide into robberies and itself will become a pirate gang that ordinary people will want to fight, from which they will simply recruit a new Marine.

KUINA

Один из немногих фанфиков по DxD написанный психически здоровым человеком. Очень понравилось развитее персонажей их взаимоотношения. Хороший язык написания позволяющий погрузится в происходящее. Жду продолжение, надеюсь работа будет доведена до логического конца.

ответ 1. если опущен знак умножения пример относится к алгебре, а в алгебре все что с умножением считается целым вы буквально делите 6 на все что после знака деления. если бы стоял знак умножения то это арифметика в которой операции просто выполняются последовательно там ответ действительно 9.