Ofensywny_Cioban

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Das pls come back

Were did you hide the chapters?

Man i stacked and read through 5 chapters at once.

it would be i tetesting to see combat with gunpowder. Thanks to mages and knights beeing available there are many tactics that can be used. Also do knights use mounts here? I mean knights are like superhumans. There are propably no horse strong enought to be usefull. Is it like before formation of knights in europe were many ppl just used them to arrive on battlefield and then fought on foot?

They got fooled

its too short...That's what she said!:)

This book is executed poorly. First of all author introduce the world as new and diffrent than Earth yet all that changed are names and maybe borders of some kingdoms. It would be better to keep names and continents of Earth. Here we get just diffrent naming slighlty diffrent map (So far we got India UK+ 2 kingdoms fighting over giblartar strait) MC is transmigrated as a Prince of island that resembles UK. If u make new world at least try to make it truly new. Another problem is with storytelling: MC wokes up as a Prince and stright up goes to his father shows his ideas and always get approval to implement them. There is no reaction to his sudden change, no reaction of his surrondings shown. There are no obstacles to aby of his actions. The world is bland and does not feel alive. We have minimal side characters and if they are introduced its only by giving name and they are used as tools to carry orders. Whole book is basycly introducing reforms and tech and talking to his father about them over and over again. And we never get reactions of the ppl affected by them. Another issue is with unrealistic timelines and unclear time skips. For example building a university in less than 8 months using late medival technology. Very disappinting.

thanks for the chapter