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This book is very awesome. Although there are parts that need some working on, I see a win-win in it. Practise writing at least 5000 words per day. Setting goals are one of the most important processes in writing.

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This novel is great so far . I love the plot of story . While i was reading the first chapter even up to chapter three my imagination grew wild , it was like i was in the novel and the events that took place in the story and now i can say i am looking forward for chapter 4 .

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