Sinplex

This whole book feels like it had black Betty blasting as a song in the background And I’m enjoying the hell out of it.

Welp man cooked…every character to congratulation. Jk tho this hit hard I thought it’s was a regular suicide mission but author said NAH we making this maximum orphans emotional damage suicide mission. Mad respect for having enough time to make this many characters with their own quirks including man eating and sadist, have group dynamics made in like 3 chapters and then send them to (most probably) god….love the writing have a good one.

I’m responding because you asked if this lacks emotion, I’m just ganna say I’m no writer nor do I have an idea of what I’m rughttt but in my opinion it’s not that it’s lacking emotions it’s just that this feels a bit sudden it’s out of the blue these two have to face their trauma. I know we got foreshadowing for kale and her both but I’m not sure that was enough build up. Regardless I’m still love the way it’s going showing more of what’s kale kales background and fights are still hype thanks for the chapter

Kael enjoying his picnic in the forest

That would be awesome, the character shenanigans is already hilarious but can we also get a auxiliary chapter character, images or just descriptions

I wanna honestly thank you for writing this story and making it free for everyone to enjoy. Not that making other wise would be unfair and in all honesty I really think it’s more unfair for you. But enough sappy stuff I just wanted to let you know your writing is amazing you, make every character feel alive and fun. World building fantastic as well, the only complaint I might have is that there’s so many different characters that I so diverse I just sometimes forget how they look. So I just kinda know how they main people look in my head but that’s whatever. Your doing great how you have a good one

Yes

Love how it started, it’s a journey to find what is was to be human I like the pacing for right now and how the main character is trying to go about his problems. Just hope there will be more thx for writing