the story itself is pretty good, it's also an original idea. the main problem is the fact that it doesn't update almost at all. overall the story is worth a read just don't expect regular updates.

this would be a great novel if it was updated regularly.

the novel is fun for the most part. it has a decent plot and pace but it gets worse with time, and starts to have more unrealistic and fantasy element's. you can clearly see why the Arthur quit because he wrote himself into a corner and jumped the mc tech by about 500 years and gave him a computer.

you do seem to slowly be getting better

you can have the tailiban take power and 911 and the war on terror happen

yes more chapter!

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yay a new chapter

more chapters!!

good chapter

why not have hem unite Mesopotamia and revive Babylon. it would be pretty cool to revive one of the oldest civilizations that been dead for millenniums.

great chapter looking forward to more. :)

a novel with a interesting concept that is well executed. and fun to read. my only problem is that the chapters are not as long as I would like them to be.

the beginning was fine, not the greatest not the worst. but as the story wen't on it progressively got worse in quality. after he got betrayed by the protos the story lose pretty much everything good about it. in the Harry potters world it felt like a wish fulfilment novel. and sufferd from what all world jump travel novels suffer from and got convoluted and hard to keep track of.

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a fun novel with an interesting concept that is pretty well excited. I is enjoyable to read and I look forward to more chapters. ttttt5ttttttt