slimy_Boi
the person with depression and no fucking determination and motivation.
Writing
of reading
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Asians and their racism... can you edit it out? it's annoying to read homophobic and racist work's
I don't care as long as you make it good story
can you shorten to just Zhou
he doesn't feel like a 27 year old mentally I hope he realises later how embarrassing it is and changes it
i mean couldn't he ask system? it's there to help I believe?
Patreon is only good if you have a schedule and have enough motivation to write... and honestly ruby is enough...
you need to step back with these adventures maybe you can think about them more before implementing them
you need more slice of life chapters ... I'm not here to insult you but you are rushing and I think you dont realise it yourself ... yes we like adventures and everything but where are those more laid-back moments? even more simple dates not those that mask new adventures etc. maybe competition Between Peter and Stark for new stuff ... maybe compete with their own companies after all if I remember correctly Peter had his own company and its been a while that it has been touched on...
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I'm not bothered enough to Google it
they only pay to be in-game and this part can be seen as giving face from MC part to car manufacturer
good enough I believe
I hope he will visit in the future
patreon or something like that? 5 or 10 forward chapters for patreon members and maybe a couple of bucks for internet?
why tf does that patch remind me of Lithuanian flag
calendar
it feels machine translated sometimes and i want grammar fixes because it's annoying
...the cheapest 5th generation aircraft is in tens of millions while 4.5 is over 5 million...