Wow.. A kuroinu FF with actual plot! Im impressed... If only the grammar as better it would be perfect. I like the romance that's slowly developing but i kinda want more kisses/Hugs/Cuddling and the like between the dark elves and MC in a normal situation and openly, like Olga comes and sits on mc lap and kiss his cheek or something. Also Olga seems very interested in electronics which is surprising. I look forward to see what the author will have the mc make with nano bots and mana. Lastly, i agree with the other review that i want author to expand the world and fight demons and do more than just kill Vult and end it there

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Now this is a surprise! a 18 version of date a live, which Is one of my favorites anime and novels... And shido is NOT a whimp with girls relationships... Though this got me thinking... how was Kotori sealed if she has to DO it with shido?... Mmmm... Well, that aside, the writing quality is above average, i will not say perfect since it has some small issues here and there but aside from that its excellent... My only problem is the updates seems to be slow =P.

Cant wait for more!, the grammar is really good and the progression is fine, though i would like more world background. Its also a bummer that mc got only 10 marriage rings in the gacha and not 17, so i hope that he can get more in the gacha (you did not say that GOD made only 10 of those =P). I hope for Reynare, Ophis, Rias, Akeno, Koneko, Kuroka, Asia, Rossweisse, Xenovia, Irina, Ravel, Le Fey, Sona, Serafall, Yasaka, Kunou, and Ingvild. So he NEEDS another 7 Godly Marriage Rings. Lastly: I look forward reading your âdûlt chapters!!!!! Pls make them juicy

SO like this? i found this on google. It fits perfectly.

Hahaha Louise summoned or rather created an Incubus it seems to be her familiar. Lets see how things goes but i quite expect a lot of adult chapters! MC seems to looks like this

Its a very unique ability, the power to control realities and dreams, but mc is limited by the small amount of energy he has, which he will slowly grow by eating the dreams of others. Honest, MC seems to be an Incubus, lets see how the adult content goes ehehe

I had this novel in my library for a more than few months now as i was disappointed in so many marvel novels... But dude, this takes the cake, been a while since i laughed so hard. Its a good novel, though MC is getting annoying with his attitude

I have never seen a FF where nie lie is the protagonist and thanks to the earth knowledge he got by absorbing that poor dude he changed his stupid mindset and now plans ahead properly!. Also, dont take 10000 chapters to bed the girls and give us a juicy chapter

Its good! though at the start i was very annoyed that MC was telling everyone about his powers and thankfully he realized he was being extremely stupid. Also... well the status system needs to be reworked. Its also interesting that he is developing the telekinesis tree to get different powers. Im just sad that this dosnt has adult content.

Im very pleased that Jasmine is with Itachi, they would make an awesome couple and in the original Jasmine was my favorite. though i hope you save Xia Qingyue, no need to add her to the hârêm if you dont want to, but at least save her from her fate, She goes NUTS! NUTS!!!!! and its all was the plan of the goddess

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Its awesome. First, the grammar is above average and i like the idea of being able to summon waifus from all over the place. But i wonder... will mc travel to other universes? Just being in konosuba is all fine and good... but its a small world. I recommend that the author reads "Shoujo Grand Summoning" Its a chinese novel with already 1012 translated chapters and complete with 2000 chapters. The novel has the typical chinese issues and the mc forces himself on the girls most of the time, but the author made the girls passive in the deed meaning mc must approach the girls for THAT to happen, but its good at least in my opinion. The mc summons girls from lots of animes at a high cost of points depending on how rare/strong that character is and the main world is a gigantic xianxia world. THe power of beings is divided into 100, with every 10 levels doing a qualitative change on everything, Meaning, a lvl 20 can beat 10 people of lvl 19 under normal circumstances.

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