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Not for me, suuper hate the mc. Maybe could've worked as a Cooking novel idk.
It's good. -Really well written, some additional twists here and there, and the added details for some arcs fit really well. The fic for me more focuses a bit more on the political/village building aspect of naruto rather than the action part. That kinda got too boring for me to be honest, with all the negotiations and advising kind of stuff. Using clones for paperwork is not the norm in this fic. -Fight scenes were amazing at first, although he kept getting stalled by some randoms just to force the late mc effect. Then the fight scenes after that feels kinda reused and uninteresting. There's little development for Mc after he got the ripoff flying raijin. -lastly, the uchiha problem's dragging on for soo long. The whole clan feels like some braindead NPCs to me except for the named characters. *As of now, 3.8 is the best that I can give it. Will delete and adjust the review after some more chapters.
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Soo.. Kabuto Nosjuro?
Really appreciate the energy you have for your works man but like I said, it's not for me. I'm sorry if I came off as a tad bit too harsh with what little i've read. - Putting an AI assisted disclaimer is not going to magically make the readers accept the fact that it's not a mess. - There no hook for me at the earlier chapters to wait for your big reveal. So i suggest fixing it, but then again, I don't write enough for my opinion to matter. - Don't know why you expect everyone to just "help" you with your work with good reviews. A review's a review. Real nice knowing you tho
Hmmm... It's good, but I kinda lost interest after reading the Omake chapters. As much as I liked the fic, there were some reasons for the low-ish review. - MC turns into a Gojo ripoff, personality wise. - It's lowkey gay. Not that I hate the relationship between Suku and MC, but it's a little too much. - Don't know why he has to grin every fight scene. - Author-san got too carried away with the Omake. Great chapters but I kinda hoped that it would be part of the story maybe after 200 or so chapters. Not much to look forward to except the culling games iguess.
Good fic, ruined by translation. Read it from the og site. Probably one of the most interesting HP fics in this site, with some interesting tweaks from the Author. The details were just soooo well established and thought out. Sadly the translation takes a dive around 40 chapters or so. Really can't stand good fics being ruined by translaton so i'm giving it a flat 2.
Amazing choice of added abilities, and the Dabi angle of the story was soo interesting. But you're trying too hard making this ff sad and it just doesn't work for me. Could've topped the rankings with just the Rumi+UA arc, instead of making sooo many random additions to the story.
He's just farming pity points with this. Imean.., fix urself first my man.